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Array ( [sid] => 71849 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I just want to die. [time] => 2004-11-16 20:01:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I....
I want....
I want you....
So bad....
It hurts....
You just have no idea....
How I feel....
How bad my life....
Really is....
That bad....
You tell me....
It's all ok....
But you just....
Just don't get it!
It hurts so bad....
Inside....
I just want to cut myself open....
And rip it out....
I scream....
Everyday....
Each night....
I just want to die....
Get it all over with....
Sadly....
Life is not a game....
It does work that way....
Not now....
Not ever....
Life sucks....
Life is horrible....
I just want to scream....
And die....
Leave me be....
To sit....
And die. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Kione [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

I just want to die.

Contributed by Kione on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:01:41 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I....
I want....
I want you....
So bad....
It hurts....
You just have no idea....
How I feel....
How bad my life....
Really is....
That bad....
You tell me....
It's all ok....
But you just....
Just don't get it!
It hurts so bad....
Inside....
I just want to cut myself open....
And rip it out....
I scream....
Everyday....
Each night....
I just want to die....
Get it all over with....
Sadly....
Life is not a game....
It does work that way....
Not now....
Not ever....
Life sucks....
Life is horrible....
I just want to scream....
And die....
Leave me be....
To sit....
And die.

Copyright © Kione ... [ 2004-11-16 20:01:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I just want to die. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:06:32 PM AEST
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good poem...just hang in there, and things will get better soon.

Re: I just want to die. (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:13:46 PM AEST
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sorry you're feeling this way, but incredible poem, very unique and raw *

Re: I just want to die. (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:37:18 PM AEST
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Keep writing.
It's one way to get something good
from the pain.

Take care.

--Mothy

Re: I just want to die. (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:27:47 PM AEST
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Feeling sorry for yourself leads to self destruction. Learn to let go,We tend to want the things we cannot have. Good write your anger hurt and love really came through.

Re: I just want to die. (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:27:59 PM AEST
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Feeling sorry for yourself leads to self destruction. Learn to let go,We tend to want the things we cannot have. Good write your anger hurt and love really came through.
Sinned

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