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Array ( [sid] => 71825 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black & White [time] => 2004-11-16 17:30:02 [hometext] => My second poem that won awards. It is a bit confusing though. [bodytext] => Black & White

Some people say they want to die,

They think it would be better.

When I here these words they say,

My blood grows even redder.

They don't even know what it's like,

No one does in all mankind.

I know and I've found,

What many has seeked to find.

I know what death feels like,

I know that death is real.

It is very hard to explain,

I can't discribe death's feel.

I know what happen after death,

I won't tell you it's dread.

Which is why the reason I choose to die,

With these secrets in my head.

If I told you or any one,

What happens when you die.

You would either think I"m crazy,

Or do nothing but cry.

It is such a bade time,

As I hold this knife.

But if I told someone,

It would ruin all your lives.

I won't give you a hint,

Or a single clue.

I won't tell you if it's good or bad,

Or when it will happen to you.

I do know when death is near,

I know on who it stalks.

I fear the worst for that person,

But on death I'll never talk.

I hate to know who will die,

I will feel all their pain.

Then when their time is over,

My tears fall like rain.

I will cry when I'm happy,

I will cry when I'm asleep.

I'll even cry when I'm having fun,

I know the shadow of death will creep.

Now this poem will go on forever,

I will always have my breath.

For I will always be alive,

As long as there is death.

--Evan L.--

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Black & White

Contributed by thepos on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:30:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Black & White

Some people say they want to die,

They think it would be better.

When I here these words they say,

My blood grows even redder.

They don't even know what it's like,

No one does in all mankind.

I know and I've found,

What many has seeked to find.

I know what death feels like,

I know that death is real.

It is very hard to explain,

I can't discribe death's feel.

I know what happen after death,

I won't tell you it's dread.

Which is why the reason I choose to die,

With these secrets in my head.

If I told you or any one,

What happens when you die.

You would either think I"m crazy,

Or do nothing but cry.

It is such a bade time,

As I hold this knife.

But if I told someone,

It would ruin all your lives.

I won't give you a hint,

Or a single clue.

I won't tell you if it's good or bad,

Or when it will happen to you.

I do know when death is near,

I know on who it stalks.

I fear the worst for that person,

But on death I'll never talk.

I hate to know who will die,

I will feel all their pain.

Then when their time is over,

My tears fall like rain.

I will cry when I'm happy,

I will cry when I'm asleep.

I'll even cry when I'm having fun,

I know the shadow of death will creep.

Now this poem will go on forever,

I will always have my breath.

For I will always be alive,

As long as there is death.

--Evan L.--

more on: www.thepoemsofsorrow.com

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Re: Black & White (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:23:49 PM AEST
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very well expressed and well written...good choice with words and im not sure why but I really enjoyed this poem...keep posting

Re: Black & White (User Rating: 1 )
by Hollie85 on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:31:24 PM AEST
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I really like the perspective you write from - very creative and fantastic writing. Keep posting!

Re: Black & White (User Rating: 1 )
by thepos on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:03:53 PM AEST
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thx. I'll keep posting.

Re: Black & White (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:29:35 PM AEST
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This is great! it has the right words and the right flow, not to mention how deep it is. I must go check out your website.

Re: Black & White (User Rating: 1 )
by Dominick-Destruction on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:45:47 AM AEST
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Fantastic write...
Death is...Only an exit to somewhere new...A beginging...
But suicide is for the weak......Fight for every last breath....
xDDx

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