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[sid] => 71796
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Nothing makes sense
[time] => 2004-11-16 15:55:34
[hometext] => This is about a relationship i was currently in. It was such a hard breakup. if you wish please comment. I'm not sure if it makes sense but lol look at the title.
[bodytext] => I'm losing my mind and my heart is breaking The tears are flowing and the pain is aching The wind blows but the trees stand still I'm as well as i'll ever be but i feel so ill The sun sets and rises but it remains dark A dog opens its mouth but there is no bark I can see but everything is a blurr I can speak but every other word is a slurr Nothing makes sense You said it's over but i'm not convinced As i look at old pictures i get the urge to cry, but no tears fall I can't believe i lost you, i can't believe i lost it all I lost seeing your lovely face I lost sight of your smile, it vanished without a trace I lost all memories of you I forgot who you are, what am i going to do? Still nothing makes sense It's over i'm finally convinced It hurts but it will pass by It's over your gone, so i say goodbye Nothing makes sense it's confusing me You're gone i see it clearly A dog barks i hear the sound What's that? The trees are moving, i think i'm coming around My vision is clear i think i'll be alright The sun is rising, i finally see the light Now it all makes sense I don't need you anymore, are you convinced? I've finally realized this relationship has reached its end Goodbye my love, my friend [comments] => 3 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 22 [informant] => BlindSuicide [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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