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Array ( [sid] => 7139 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => People [time] => 2002-11-21 08:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You come and you go
Your Prozac smiles
And your Morphine tenderness
Like ants up a tree
Line up, form a queue
Everyone of you fall down
As I pour on the water, destroy you all

Empty stares, Empty minds
Fill it up; fill it up, more space for you lies
I pass you all by, you all seem so low
Yet I feel the lowest
Like paper in the wind
Never know which way to turn
Leave me alone; let me be

I try to catch up; you all walk away
Feel like the outsider, Alien being
You say try to be someone
Yet you are all the same
Same fate, routine, agenda
No escape, no win, no surrender
All lose
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 13 [informant] => adsalamon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

People

Contributed by adsalamon on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You come and you go
Your Prozac smiles
And your Morphine tenderness
Like ants up a tree
Line up, form a queue
Everyone of you fall down
As I pour on the water, destroy you all

Empty stares, Empty minds
Fill it up; fill it up, more space for you lies
I pass you all by, you all seem so low
Yet I feel the lowest
Like paper in the wind
Never know which way to turn
Leave me alone; let me be

I try to catch up; you all walk away
Feel like the outsider, Alien being
You say try to be someone
Yet you are all the same
Same fate, routine, agenda
No escape, no win, no surrender
All lose

Copyright © adsalamon ... [ 2002-11-21 08:00:00]
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Re: People (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 12:37:03 PM AEST
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exactly adrian, THEY all LOSE...and you win...kind of makes me think why im so depressed, ya know? if people are the problem, they're the ones causing me so much pain, why cant i just say "you lose" move on and not let them get to me...and they wonder why i LIKE being an outsider...excellent writing

Lindsey

Re: People (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 06:59:34 AM AEST
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i love this world, but i hate most of the ppl in it...
i love this

xxx
B.S

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