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Array ( [sid] => 71371 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => California Sky [time] => 2004-11-13 20:48:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => these stars and galaxies are rendered useless under the impression that your making. why cant we just fly into the ocean and pretend like we are dolphins swimming and dancing with the waves splashing against our peacefull and serene, comotose state induced soul and body. look at the angels upove, a light glimmer runs off of there body and the brighest smiles, transfer onto my round face. suicide numbers are growing out of control, its all our fault. people need to care about eachother no matter how bad ***** is in our small little lives.

take a picture of this California sky. post it in your room on your wall so you will remember me when you return to Arizona.

rivers and the stones that i will skip across them. i wanna smell the air and forget about life. i want to reach the mountains and look down on you. and i just dont seem to get this body im in, sometimes it turns and twists like the insides of your body. and what if the ceiling were to collapse?, what would i say, what would i do? [comments] => 0 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 48 [informant] => frmpoison2static [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

California Sky

Contributed by frmpoison2static on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:48:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

these stars and galaxies are rendered useless under the impression that your making. why cant we just fly into the ocean and pretend like we are dolphins swimming and dancing with the waves splashing against our peacefull and serene, comotose state induced soul and body. look at the angels upove, a light glimmer runs off of there body and the brighest smiles, transfer onto my round face. suicide numbers are growing out of control, its all our fault. people need to care about eachother no matter how bad ***** is in our small little lives.

take a picture of this California sky. post it in your room on your wall so you will remember me when you return to Arizona.

rivers and the stones that i will skip across them. i wanna smell the air and forget about life. i want to reach the mountains and look down on you. and i just dont seem to get this body im in, sometimes it turns and twists like the insides of your body. and what if the ceiling were to collapse?, what would i say, what would i do?

Copyright © frmpoison2static ... [ 2004-11-13 20:48:07]
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