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Array ( [sid] => 7134 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My life [time] => 2002-11-21 07:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I look back at my life,
What made me happy?
What made me sad?
What made me start the knife?

I can’t picture one thing,
When I was over the moon,
When I was in h*ll,
When I could even sing.

I think of the friends I had,
They all came and went,
None of them great,
None of them bad.

I try and picture the one,
The one who stayed,
The one who’s always there,
But they disappeared into the sun.

I think of my friends I have now,
They all just sail on through,
Who will be there next time I look back,
I want to keep them but don’t know how.

I try and make things black and white,
But things are never that simple,
They will only be black and white,
If I would only loose my sight.

I think of the ones I have love,
I stare into their eyes,
And ask them if they will be there,
But they fly away like a graceful Dove.

I sit on top of a cliff,
Staring out for miles,
I think of my life,
And I go all stiff.

I have no past to be proud of,
I have no present to be proud of,
I have no future to be proud of,
I have no life that I’m proud of.

What have I done?
What will I do?
My life isn’t boring,
My life isn’t fun. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 13 [informant] => van [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
My life

Contributed by van on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I look back at my life,
What made me happy?
What made me sad?
What made me start the knife?

I can’t picture one thing,
When I was over the moon,
When I was in h*ll,
When I could even sing.

I think of the friends I had,
They all came and went,
None of them great,
None of them bad.

I try and picture the one,
The one who stayed,
The one who’s always there,
But they disappeared into the sun.

I think of my friends I have now,
They all just sail on through,
Who will be there next time I look back,
I want to keep them but don’t know how.

I try and make things black and white,
But things are never that simple,
They will only be black and white,
If I would only loose my sight.

I think of the ones I have love,
I stare into their eyes,
And ask them if they will be there,
But they fly away like a graceful Dove.

I sit on top of a cliff,
Staring out for miles,
I think of my life,
And I go all stiff.

I have no past to be proud of,
I have no present to be proud of,
I have no future to be proud of,
I have no life that I’m proud of.

What have I done?
What will I do?
My life isn’t boring,
My life isn’t fun.




Copyright © van ... [ 2002-11-21 07:00:00]
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Re: My life (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampy on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 10:28:11 PM AEST
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Love it... can relate...




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