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[sid] => 71115
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Pool of Me
[time] => 2004-11-11 17:09:07
[hometext] => I wrote this a really long time ago...kinda poo...please comment! I love you!
[bodytext] => You cut me deep I lie in a pool of my blood But still you yell, cutting deeper I cry out You dont care You scream to make yourself feel better The pool grows thicker, wider I try to fight back But smart remaks is the best I can do You yell on Insulting me (I thought you loved me) The pool turns to a lake Sadness runs in streams They run into my mouth And burn like acid Yell. Yell my friend The cuts will mend and scar But I will be stronger Stronger than you And you, foe Will wish that you had never cut me The things I did where never enough I hope, I wish, I pray That you'll realize what youve done Before I heal You can apoligize But I wont forgive But it may just save you Maybe one day Youll know what its like To pick up the pieces... Dudes...if you made it through this entire poem, I applaud you! This one was sucktastic...sorry about that! *hugs for suffering through it* [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 6 [informant] => sid_the_tampon_fairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
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