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Glass House
Contributed by
Satrianus
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 07:41:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You can see the world turning
Yet you are standing still.
Living in your glass house.
No destiny to fulfill.
Why do you feel scared ?
Why do you feel alone ?
In your house of glass.
You shouldnt be throwing stones
Too weak to tear down the walls
you were strong enough to build
Too weak to break through the glass
To throw away your guilt
Afraid to touch the walls of life.
It will shatter into pieces
As soon as anyone comes close
Your defense just increases
Why do you feel scared ?
Why do you feel alone ?
In your house of glass.
You shouldnt be throwing stones
Too weak to break the barrier
That resides within
Too weak to lay it down
You just rest in sin
Copyright ©
Satrianus
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2004-11-11 07:41:35]
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Re: Glass House
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by n2dep2care on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:01:15 AM AEST
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Wow, this really hit home! It’s amazing to me how you can express so very well what I am feeling inside. Well done! Wonderful write.
Laurie |
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Re: Glass House
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by screwup on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:05:17 AM AEST
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this was yet another amazing poem of yours. you did such a good job.
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Re: Glass House
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:07:52 AM AEST
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Great write! This was wonderful. I'd work a little more on describing but maybe I'm just picky today, all in all, nice job.
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