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Time Unleavened

Contributed by Ooniegirl on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Weak droplets of rain residue
succumb apathetically
branches slouched
like shoulders
from the weight of wet
the complexion of autumn
dulled colours washed and faded
clouds fused
like an impenetrable blanket
of melancholy
smothering sullen hills
essence of sodden ground
deaden thoughts
of a mystical winter

Copyright © Ooniegirl ... [ 2002-11-20 20:00:00]
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Re: Time Unleavened (User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:35:43 AM AEST
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Wow! Great vocabulary! Great write!

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Re: Time Unleavened (User Rating: 1 )
by colette on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 04:09:42 PM AEST
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girlFRIEND,
just the thought of a mystical winter has considerably brightened my oh so dreary day.
'the weight of wet'. best i've read in a long while. you have not only the gift of gab, but the gift of language. gorgeous.

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