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Array ( [sid] => 7094 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Invisible Tears [time] => 2002-11-20 18:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My tears are invisible but they are there.
The reason they’re hiding is ‘cause you don’t care.
Through torture at school and break-ups from hell,
My tears were hiding, which caused you to yell.
Sadness and shame are things I hold inside,
These are two reasons from you my tears hide.
I wish you could see all the things I don’t say.
If my tears weren’t invisible you’d be okay.
All you see is the surface, the real problems hide.
When you blame me all my problems collide.
My nose isn’t running and my eyes aren’t red,
But you can’t see the tears in my head.
So one day look deeper, try to be me,
Maybe you’ll feel the tears you can’t see.
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Invisible Tears

Contributed by ANDREA on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My tears are invisible but they are there.
The reason they’re hiding is ‘cause you don’t care.
Through torture at school and break-ups from hell,
My tears were hiding, which caused you to yell.
Sadness and shame are things I hold inside,
These are two reasons from you my tears hide.
I wish you could see all the things I don’t say.
If my tears weren’t invisible you’d be okay.
All you see is the surface, the real problems hide.
When you blame me all my problems collide.
My nose isn’t running and my eyes aren’t red,
But you can’t see the tears in my head.
So one day look deeper, try to be me,
Maybe you’ll feel the tears you can’t see.

Copyright Â© ANDREA ... [ 2002-11-20 18:00:00]
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Re: Invisible Tears (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:38:05 PM AEST
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nice write , i like it a lot :) ...or should i be :(

Re: Invisible Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:39:36 PM AEST
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nice write , i like it a lot :) ...or should i be :(

Re: Invisible Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:46:07 PM AEST
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It's amazing what people can't see
sometimes or that we even feel we have
to hide how we feel from someone
Thanks for sharing this one, i enjoyed
it, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Invisible Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 01:24:59 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, Andrea.. This is a beautiful write... Hope things seem brighter soon..
Jenni

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