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Array ( [sid] => 70821 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lovers' Thoughts [time] => 2004-11-09 16:10:36 [hometext] => A little longer than normal, but I'm pretty happy with it...And, don't worry only parts of it are true.... [bodytext] => He told me that he cares for me,
His truth was far too late,
For now a husband and a child,
Have become my only fate.
~
I told her my secret tonight,
Inebriated as I might have been,
Love, I see within her eyes,
She will become my one true friend,
~
Today was my day to start anew,
I told him, his love I must leave,
That as devastating as it was to say,
We are halting this passion in secrecy,
~
I discovered I will miss her today,
Her marriage deserves a chance,
It is painful now, to see her leave,
My lover bound by circumstance,
~
Today I woke up thinking of him,
His touches on my mind,
My future flashing through my head,
As if they were my own to design,
~
She lingered in her touch today,
I think I saw it in her eyes,
That she is thinking of me too,
Her life caught up in lies,
~
I knew that it was best left undone,
But I had to feel his lovers kiss,
We parted and I savored him,
The aftertaste of my true loves’ lips,
~
A kiss….. We both dared it to occur,
Built up by anticipation,
She is taunting and testing fate,
As if open for manipulation,
~
I have ripped another’s heart in two,
Purely to mend my own,
The happiness I am searching for,
Is the love that he has shown,
~
Two very tragic deaths ensue...
~
My Husband
~
And My Wife
~
A new world and family brought to life,
By a simple bloodied knife.

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Lovers' Thoughts

Contributed by _Raspberry_ on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:10:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He told me that he cares for me,
His truth was far too late,
For now a husband and a child,
Have become my only fate.
~
I told her my secret tonight,
Inebriated as I might have been,
Love, I see within her eyes,
She will become my one true friend,
~
Today was my day to start anew,
I told him, his love I must leave,
That as devastating as it was to say,
We are halting this passion in secrecy,
~
I discovered I will miss her today,
Her marriage deserves a chance,
It is painful now, to see her leave,
My lover bound by circumstance,
~
Today I woke up thinking of him,
His touches on my mind,
My future flashing through my head,
As if they were my own to design,
~
She lingered in her touch today,
I think I saw it in her eyes,
That she is thinking of me too,
Her life caught up in lies,
~
I knew that it was best left undone,
But I had to feel his lovers kiss,
We parted and I savored him,
The aftertaste of my true loves’ lips,
~
A kiss….. We both dared it to occur,
Built up by anticipation,
She is taunting and testing fate,
As if open for manipulation,
~
I have ripped another’s heart in two,
Purely to mend my own,
The happiness I am searching for,
Is the love that he has shown,
~
Two very tragic deaths ensue...
~
My Husband
~
And My Wife
~
A new world and family brought to life,
By a simple bloodied knife.

Copyright Â© _Raspberry_ ... [ 2004-11-09 16:10:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lovers' Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:21:16 PM AEST
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Ras, this was awesome! very nicely written. a very cool dark write. i really enjoyed it. loved this. 5 stars
Arden

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