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Array ( [sid] => 70818 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Truck load [time] => 2004-11-09 15:46:55 [hometext] => written when i was meant 2 b studying at college [bodytext] => For some it's just a nuggle,
others a simple quibble.
for some its even a load!
I can't help but wonder,
if these things that i ponder
should drive me right right down the road!
..........................................................................like this

Not up the wall
...............................as some might say
It's worse, more than a fall
If this truck gets fuller it will crash
So for this i want to lie down
take off of my face this bluntened frown
But theres no time! Too much to do! I must dash! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 48 [informant] => chocolate_girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Truck load

Contributed by chocolate_girl on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:46:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

For some it's just a nuggle,
others a simple quibble.
for some its even a load!
I can't help but wonder,
if these things that i ponder
should drive me right right down the road!
..........................................................................like this

Not up the wall
...............................as some might say
It's worse, more than a fall
If this truck gets fuller it will crash
So for this i want to lie down
take off of my face this bluntened frown
But theres no time! Too much to do! I must dash!

Copyright © chocolate_girl ... [ 2004-11-09 15:46:55]
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Re: Truck load (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:03:29 PM AEST
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Well this certainly brought back memories. But keep writing because it will help to de-stress you during the heavy times when you meet yourself coming and going and you don't get to sleep for two days during exams.

You have a nice sense of humor and it shows in your poem.

Kie

Re: Truck load (User Rating: 1 )
by 8kiwi8 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:43:20 AM AEST
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well done:-) i like the ending, how you put the whole point of the poem into 'action' ( if that makes sense) well done x x x

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