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taring skin
daddy's hitting
me again

fresh cuts
cover old scars
new cuts cover
where the old ones are

dripping red
flowing down
psychotic mind
blocking sound

fires burn
the hell inside
nothing left
forced to die

drown...
in your own blood
and leave me be
don't show me
things I don't want to see

crawling in my skin
raping me
again and again

shoving it in
pushing the blade
making the pain fade

PLEASE... NO
DON'T... IT HURTS
NO DADDY DON'T!!!!

the pain
it is unbearable...

I cannot sleep
I am up in the night
as he holds me down
oh so tight

ripping flesh
taring skin
daddy's coming
to get me again

[comments] => 10 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 59 [informant] => screwup [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Empty

Contributed by screwup on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:59:49 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

ripping flesh
taring skin
daddy's hitting
me again

fresh cuts
cover old scars
new cuts cover
where the old ones are

dripping red
flowing down
psychotic mind
blocking sound

fires burn
the hell inside
nothing left
forced to die

drown...
in your own blood
and leave me be
don't show me
things I don't want to see

crawling in my skin
raping me
again and again

shoving it in
pushing the blade
making the pain fade

PLEASE... NO
DON'T... IT HURTS
NO DADDY DON'T!!!!

the pain
it is unbearable...

I cannot sleep
I am up in the night
as he holds me down
oh so tight

ripping flesh
taring skin
daddy's coming
to get me again

Copyright © screwup ... [ 2004-11-09 13:59:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:08:39 PM AEST
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!!WOW!! What a write so vivid. It flowed very well to. Such a heart breaking story you tell But it happens a lot in the world today. And it makes me sick how anyone could hurt there own child. This was truly a "GREAT WRITE" it send a message to all who reads it. Thanks for sharing "screwup"

~~DENNIS~~

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:16:05 PM AEST
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Wow. Powerfull and pretty scary.

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by ksprincess42004 on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:41:35 PM AEST
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An all too vivid and touching poem. Good job!

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:32:02 PM AEST
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i felt frightened just to read this. you're so strong to come through it!
how do you manage?

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:46:59 PM AEST
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this flowed wonderfully and has a lot of emotion...good luck with your dad

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:04:57 PM AEST
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This brought a tear to my eyes, so vivid is the fear and pain. Amazing write!

Laurie

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:45:17 PM AEST
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hey nice write, read some of mine ok and tell me what u think well i g2g bye

DEMON

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:10:18 AM AEST
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powerful, deep, disturbing and scary, a very vivid write here.,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:47:22 AM AEST
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So very powerful and sad....
it was very emotional...
I'm sorry people have to go through the life like that.
You must be a very strong person to share topics like that.
*Much love*

*~givingin~*

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:37:15 AM AEST
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Hate to say it but this poem hurt, though the maening within your words differs to my feelings, it just dredged up memories, too long buried, hey no worries, this is not about me.
You alwasy did write so visually, so deep, your words show so many feelings and unbridaled emotions, keep writting...beautiful poem, showing true strength.

Peace be with you

Karl

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