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Guilt?Emptyness?Loss?
For someone you cared for and loved the most?
You finally find that one person who makes you feel happy andlike oyur something special.
When you are with that one person, everything else just disappears.
All the controversy, hate, sex,lies don't exist.
For some , they wait their whole lifes.
There he was, standing in front of me.
He called my over, and we wetn somewhere so we could talk.
Two hours passed and it seemed like only 15 minutes.
As he slowly passionately kissed,
I idved in head first, falling in love.
I can still remember the way he tastes.
I can still see his big brown eyes sparkling in the moonlight.
As the car missed that curve, I have no idea what was going through his mind.
No idea what his eyes saw as he prayed to God aloud.
i guess I will never know the answers. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 48 [informant] => flash_16 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Dived In

Contributed by flash_16 on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:43:40 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Have you ever felt pain?
Guilt?Emptyness?Loss?
For someone you cared for and loved the most?
You finally find that one person who makes you feel happy andlike oyur something special.
When you are with that one person, everything else just disappears.
All the controversy, hate, sex,lies don't exist.
For some , they wait their whole lifes.
There he was, standing in front of me.
He called my over, and we wetn somewhere so we could talk.
Two hours passed and it seemed like only 15 minutes.
As he slowly passionately kissed,
I idved in head first, falling in love.
I can still remember the way he tastes.
I can still see his big brown eyes sparkling in the moonlight.
As the car missed that curve, I have no idea what was going through his mind.
No idea what his eyes saw as he prayed to God aloud.
i guess I will never know the answers.

Copyright © flash_16 ... [ 2004-11-09 13:43:40]
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Re: Dived In (User Rating: 1 )
by alexb on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:50:43 AM AEST
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another great poem, and so very sad

Re: Dived In (User Rating: 1 )
by subchild on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:45:34 AM AEST
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Perhaps you should consider not writing anymore and just going on and doing it all in..I get tired of ppl crying for things they dont need

Re: Dived In (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 01:56:50 AM AEST
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not such a great poem, good meaning and nice try.

--amanda--

Re: Dived In (User Rating: 1 )
by Rum on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 05:02:07 PM AEST
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I don't what some of those reviewers were thinking, I REALLY liked your poem. I'm still thinking about the meaning right now. And in my opinion a poem is a good poem if you have to think about. Overall, even though parts of it were a little like a story, it is still a great poem. Don't listen to anything negetive and keep writing.

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