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Hoping all my problems left
Warm blood spills from in my veins
Burning, throbbing new found pains
Lick the blood to clean my wound
Hiding deep within my room
Carving deeper every day
Bleeding all my pain away
Suicide runs through my mind
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Bleed

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:41:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Ice cold blade slice through my flesh
Hoping all my problems left
Warm blood spills from in my veins
Burning, throbbing new found pains
Lick the blood to clean my wound
Hiding deep within my room
Carving deeper every day
Bleeding all my pain away
Suicide runs through my mind
Who knows tonight may be my time

Copyright © EternalNight4x ... [ 2004-11-09 13:41:15]
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Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:46:08 PM AEST
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Blood it's not just a game it's a way of life for thoses who cut to take pain away I like the line "Ice cold blade slice through my flesh" Your words remind me of myself and how i to cut the pain away "NICW WRITE" EternalNight4x.

~~DENNIS~~

Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:19:03 PM AEST
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I am forced to agree with Lemmen. Good Write!

Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:40:45 PM AEST
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definetely belongs under 'Suicide' poetry... you did such a good job. I completely understand what a hell you are going through. Just keep your head up high.
~screwup

Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:38:29 PM AEST
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that was my plan tonight! ... kind of didn't happen though, or maybe im just living dead... mmm, yeah, proberly some thing like that.
excellent poem by the way!
it really reached out to me!

Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:09:08 PM AEST
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i can relate to this all too well....its like you took this from straight out of my mind....if you ever need to talk to someone PM me or IM me at x0xbabydancerx0x....awesome poem....you expressed the pain so well....great job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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