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You are the first step of the day I make.
Longing, starving,needed you so much.
Shaking up from the slightest touch.
Without you I wouldn't stand a chance.
My soul is on fire from this bleeding romance.
You are the blood in my veins.
Driving me crazy but keeping me sane.
Cant be without you, wouldn't stand a chance..
Never had nothing on going as this bleeding romance.
8-18-04
Tonya L. Turner
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ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE

Contributed by destinyfate on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:44:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You are the first thing I crave when I awake.
You are the first step of the day I make.
Longing, starving,needed you so much.
Shaking up from the slightest touch.
Without you I wouldn't stand a chance.
My soul is on fire from this bleeding romance.
You are the blood in my veins.
Driving me crazy but keeping me sane.
Cant be without you, wouldn't stand a chance..
Never had nothing on going as this bleeding romance.
8-18-04
Tonya L. Turner

Copyright © destinyfate ... [ 2004-11-08 20:44:38]
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Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:56:05 PM AEST
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Awesome masterpiece.
Great writing.
It very rarely takes me over five minetes to write a write.
Keep doing wat cha doin 'cause this one is great!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:13:39 AM AEST
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This made me think of the romance i have with food. The compulsion to want it morning, noon, and night, when I can't deal with what's going on in my head or my emotions are all in a rampage. It's funny I could have thought of you speaking about a man or woman, but what I thought of what the feeling you have towards an addiction whether it be food, drugs, ro alcohol. When poetry makes me think like this I enjoy reading it very much.

Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:37:43 PM AEST
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Sounds like an unfed passion.
A wake up dream
A bottle of wine
Morning coffee and needed caffine
An addition to something like cocain
Whatever I liked the sensation
I enjoyed your poem Ongoing Bleeding Romance
It was smooth as a love song
Keep writting you can't go wrong
Sinned

Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:42:01 PM AEST
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"Driving me crazy but keeping me sane." Now *that* I can relate to. I like this in spite of how short it is. Must be one of those poems that just came to you from the muse. Cheers!

Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by Ali on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 06:13:07 AM AEST
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Someone could use these as their wedding vows I'm sure :)

Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 11:47:29 AM AEST
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Great poem.. I loved this.. It was amazing...

take care
christina

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