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Array ( [sid] => 70653 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CRYSTAL METH [time] => 2004-11-08 16:45:52 [hometext] => About This Poem: I HAVE KNOWN A LOT OF PEOPLE HOOKED ON CRACK AND METH AND HAVE SEEN WHAT IT HAS DONE TOTHEM JUST THOUGHT I'D SHARE [bodytext] =>
Pumping that drug that crystal
cane of fainted love
Into her veins
What a rush.

The monster of meth
Ravages her flesh
Spider fall upon her
Snakes slither her way.

Her pain just melts away
once it's in her veins.
Nothing to do stares into a
deep gaze.

The ground splits open
The devils appear
Laughing as she cries her tears

Burning flesh
On fire with no care
Dreaming pink summer haze
Sex drives the soul with no care.

The hours turn to day and the
days to weeks
Sleep not here
Meth is the way
Bones appear
Flesh is eaten away
The drug is the only way

Quarter, Half gram shots
Into her veins
She doesn't care
Just wants the pain to fade away.

Purple haze
Just one more day
Life will pass away

The drug all her hopes melt
away into the spoon
Her sex freely given
for more.

Just to take the edge off
wanted to say good-bye to life
and to love.

As the drug eats her freewill
A slave she will die
Just to end the hurt thats is
WITHIN.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN [comments] => 6 [counter] => 780 [topic] => 66 [informant] => lemmen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

CRYSTAL METH

Contributed by lemmen on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 04:45:52 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Pumping that drug that crystal
cane of fainted love
Into her veins
What a rush.

The monster of meth
Ravages her flesh
Spider fall upon her
Snakes slither her way.

Her pain just melts away
once it's in her veins.
Nothing to do stares into a
deep gaze.

The ground splits open
The devils appear
Laughing as she cries her tears

Burning flesh
On fire with no care
Dreaming pink summer haze
Sex drives the soul with no care.

The hours turn to day and the
days to weeks
Sleep not here
Meth is the way
Bones appear
Flesh is eaten away
The drug is the only way

Quarter, Half gram shots
Into her veins
She doesn't care
Just wants the pain to fade away.

Purple haze
Just one more day
Life will pass away

The drug all her hopes melt
away into the spoon
Her sex freely given
for more.

Just to take the edge off
wanted to say good-bye to life
and to love.

As the drug eats her freewill
A slave she will die
Just to end the hurt thats is
WITHIN.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-11-08 16:45:52]
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Re: CRYSTAL METH (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:26:31 PM AEST
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FANTASTIC poem! i think you did such a great job exspressing both points of view effortlessly, even though it dose make you feel good its bad. i love te line
"As the drug eats her freewill
A slave she will die"
its so true, you did an amazing job!

Re: CRYSTAL METH (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:56:53 AM AEST
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Very True very accurate descriptions of a slammers thoughts.. I was shocked 2 see this one here!! thank you now i know imnot alone in my struggle with the speed demon!
Great poem!! Good JOb, you touched apart of my soul! Keep Writing always!!

Re: CRYSTAL METH (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:19:21 AM AEST
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Drugs are horrible and ruin so many beautiful people. People look at addicts with disgust and that is not fair. I have suffered cocaine addiction and oxycoton addiction and have almost dies a couple of times. I ahte being a slave to a drug. Even now that I am clean I still want and wish for more. Your poem made me sad. Made me remember.

Re: CRYSTAL METH (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:54:14 AM AEST
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That's vey well written... You went through all of the emotions that somebody would go through...Well in my opinon, this poem is very good, and I really really really really enjoyed reading it, and what the experiances would be

Re: CRYSTAL METH (User Rating: 1 )
by fallenhybridangel on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:27:20 PM AEST
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very good piece. i like the way you wrote this and i like the emotion. also thanks for the comment on my poem suicidal lullaby.

*+*fallenhybridangel*+*

Re: CRYSTAL METH (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:20:01 AM AEST
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Thanks for all the comments.

~~DENNIS~~

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