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To me and my family
You didn't think of the consequences
You thought so selfishly
A life we fought so hard for
Has been broken in two
All the pain and suffering
Has been brought on by you
You were only thinking
Of how it would affect you
Because of what you have done
We have to start anew.
You've moved on with your life
And left us behind
I feel as though I've lost my Dad
Someone I'll never be able to find.
I was 'Daddy's Little Girl'
It was you that I adored
Now that you've betrayed us all
I don't feel that way anymore
I still need you to be my Dad
I still need someone I can talk to
But I don't know what to say anymore
The words between us are so few.
I will always love you Dad
With all of my heart
But we'll never have what we had before
Because we have drifted so far apart. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Tamara [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Dad

Contributed by Tamara on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:21:43 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I hate you for what you have done
To me and my family
You didn't think of the consequences
You thought so selfishly
A life we fought so hard for
Has been broken in two
All the pain and suffering
Has been brought on by you
You were only thinking
Of how it would affect you
Because of what you have done
We have to start anew.
You've moved on with your life
And left us behind
I feel as though I've lost my Dad
Someone I'll never be able to find.
I was 'Daddy's Little Girl'
It was you that I adored
Now that you've betrayed us all
I don't feel that way anymore
I still need you to be my Dad
I still need someone I can talk to
But I don't know what to say anymore
The words between us are so few.
I will always love you Dad
With all of my heart
But we'll never have what we had before
Because we have drifted so far apart.

Copyright © Tamara ... [ 2004-11-08 08:21:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dad (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:42:46 AM AEST
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Awww this is sad because it seems to me that you used to be really close to your dad... and now you arn't... I hope it gets better though... Great write....

~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~

Re: Dad (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:12:15 PM AEST
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heartbreakingly sad, I am sorry that your relationship with your dad isnt what it used to be*hugs* this is a very emotional write,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Dad (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:41:47 PM AEST
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That's really good...i like your ryhme sceme (can't spell) and it was very well written and well expressed...i really enjoyed this poem and thats coming from me someone who hates everhting lol

Re: Dad (User Rating: 1 )
by alexb on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:41:55 AM AEST
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so very sad, I almost cried (almost) , great rhyming, great poem

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