Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 11-June 01:14:29 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 7054 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => my WORST enemy [time] => 2002-11-20 03:00:00 [hometext] => I didn't know what catagory to pick, so I went with the mood I was in when writing this! [bodytext] => I know my enemy well
Her very story I could tell
Every secret she conceals
I could easily reveal

She is rotten to the core
Nasty little skanky whore
Mean as all can be
I wish everyone could see

She is gifted with a sting
She will only leave you hurting
So don’t take her as a friend
You’ll be better in the end

I’ve had to deal with her debris
It has brought me to my knees
I warned them, oh how I did
The truth from them was hid

Thinking they were the exception
Till pains real conception
They kept going
Naive and unknowing

She has a crafty disguise
That only I don’t buy
I see through her façade
Watching everyone applaud

They don’t see her reality
They don’t see my enemy
The real her only I can see
For my worst enemy is me
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 356 [topic] => 6 [informant] => LJ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
my WORST enemy

Contributed by LJ on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I know my enemy well
Her very story I could tell
Every secret she conceals
I could easily reveal

She is rotten to the core
Nasty little skanky whore
Mean as all can be
I wish everyone could see

She is gifted with a sting
She will only leave you hurting
So don’t take her as a friend
You’ll be better in the end

I’ve had to deal with her debris
It has brought me to my knees
I warned them, oh how I did
The truth from them was hid

Thinking they were the exception
Till pains real conception
They kept going
Naive and unknowing

She has a crafty disguise
That only I don’t buy
I see through her façade
Watching everyone applaud

They don’t see her reality
They don’t see my enemy
The real her only I can see
For my worst enemy is me




Copyright © LJ ... [ 2002-11-20 03:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: my WORST enemy (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:02:04 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
"it's no surprise to me i am my own worst enemy... cuz every now and then i kick the living **** out of me..." lol, i just had to, this reminded me so much of that song by Lit!! but this on it's own is very good!! beautiful! i love it! kudos! ;0) -daniel


Re: my WORST enemy (User Rating: 1 )
by Ryanchandler on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:17:26 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
The ending really surprised me. Really crafty writing, excellent!


Re: my WORST enemy (User Rating: 1 )
by me_n_me_alone on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:38:44 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Great write LJ!!! I can relate because that is how I feel about myself.


Re: my WORST enemy (User Rating: 1 )
by Nessiecat on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:42:03 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Hey, Nessiecat here,
I can't believe this, but I posted a peom with the same title and more or less the same message last night!
I'm stunned!
Maybe we have great minds lol


Re: my WORST enemy (User Rating: 1 )
by Justice3310 on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 04:08:01 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Great write it feels good to express our anger at times you have great talent in the way you express.........Great write
Justice


Re: my WORST enemy (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:07:10 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is sad really, it made me
think alot about myself and how i am
I know that i am my own worst enemy
as well..This is a good write, it gave me
alot to think about as well. Thanks for
sharing this one, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com