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Array ( [sid] => 69835 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My One [time] => 2004-11-02 12:55:12 [hometext] => To a Friend who means the world to me, I love you [bodytext] => I don't know why I want you
Or even if you care
What am I supposed to do
Should I hide my love or share
I've given you things forgotten
Been there in your times of need
Cooked for you food I've boughten
Helped you whenever I could, you see
Still you pretend I don't exist
Talk to everyone else
When I'm not standing in your midst
I miss you and nothing helps
You talk of girls who've wronged you
Women who have broken your heart
You think that you have been a fool
That its your fault it fell apart
But here I am waiting
Patiently standing aside
Caring for you without stating
What it is I feel inside
You give your heart away again
To an undeserving girl
And I'll be here to hold you when
She leaves without a word
I'm sick of getting no respect
And holding together your heart
If you could only see I represent
A love that would never fall apart
We aren't so different you and I
I've fallen for bad guys too
But something about you caught my eye
There was nothing I could do
So here I sit alone and waiting
For you to recognize my love
I just can't stop contemplating
If you could be my One [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 33 [informant] => laurenwash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
My One

Contributed by laurenwash on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



I don't know why I want you
Or even if you care
What am I supposed to do
Should I hide my love or share
I've given you things forgotten
Been there in your times of need
Cooked for you food I've boughten
Helped you whenever I could, you see
Still you pretend I don't exist
Talk to everyone else
When I'm not standing in your midst
I miss you and nothing helps
You talk of girls who've wronged you
Women who have broken your heart
You think that you have been a fool
That its your fault it fell apart
But here I am waiting
Patiently standing aside
Caring for you without stating
What it is I feel inside
You give your heart away again
To an undeserving girl
And I'll be here to hold you when
She leaves without a word
I'm sick of getting no respect
And holding together your heart
If you could only see I represent
A love that would never fall apart
We aren't so different you and I
I've fallen for bad guys too
But something about you caught my eye
There was nothing I could do
So here I sit alone and waiting
For you to recognize my love
I just can't stop contemplating
If you could be my One




Copyright © laurenwash ... [ 2004-11-02 12:55:12]
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Re: My One (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:57:03 PM AEST
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great write,, maybe you should show them this poem,you could be waiting for a chance, sometimes you have to be brave and admit your feelings, as you may spend your life regretting not telling them how you feel, good luck...*hugs*

takecare

pixie xx


Re: My One (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 02:00:39 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem so very very very well, i have the same problem !! yes maybe you should show him this Poem hey, it could turn out good ya never know.....but anyways Great Write !! Good Luck !! hope it turns out the way ya want it to !!




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