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Array ( [sid] => 69582 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One More Day [time] => 2004-10-31 17:19:28 [hometext] => A finial prayer to God [bodytext] => Everywhere I turn, there you are
Alone with me in this dark alley
Pushing me farther into the loneliness
Somewhere I belong, to the heart of the damned
Looking behind my shoulder
Sensing your unwanted touch
How God brings me through another day
Is remarkable to see
Look into my soul, and you'll find what
I'm searching for
A love much better than I know
Someone's eternal bliss
Blessed on to me
Pray with me now,
To help me through this
I don't understand how I get like this
Always coming back to you
Why can't this make sense
Clear the lost ramblings inside my
***** up head
Hide with me through an eternal war
That lyes up ahead
I can taste it on the things you say
It makes me want to kill myself
To hide from this fear
God, I stand here giving myself to you
Take it all, the things I cannot bear
Just one more day of hell
Which I feel isn't just
Why must this life be so doomed to
A cave where I will be locked away?
How do I float through with out an emotion
How did I become so numb?
God help me through, please,
Just one more day
What more can I ask? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Fairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
One More Day

Contributed by Fairy on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:19:28 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Everywhere I turn, there you are
Alone with me in this dark alley
Pushing me farther into the loneliness
Somewhere I belong, to the heart of the damned
Looking behind my shoulder
Sensing your unwanted touch
How God brings me through another day
Is remarkable to see
Look into my soul, and you'll find what
I'm searching for
A love much better than I know
Someone's eternal bliss
Blessed on to me
Pray with me now,
To help me through this
I don't understand how I get like this
Always coming back to you
Why can't this make sense
Clear the lost ramblings inside my
***** up head
Hide with me through an eternal war
That lyes up ahead
I can taste it on the things you say
It makes me want to kill myself
To hide from this fear
God, I stand here giving myself to you
Take it all, the things I cannot bear
Just one more day of hell
Which I feel isn't just
Why must this life be so doomed to
A cave where I will be locked away?
How do I float through with out an emotion
How did I become so numb?
God help me through, please,
Just one more day
What more can I ask?




Copyright © Fairy ... [ 2004-10-31 17:19:28]
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Re: One More Day (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:33:09 PM AEST
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A very heart felt, touching prayer to God.
A masterpeice of luv for our creator that luvs all the same.
Keep the faith and hang tuff as all God expects of u is to luv and trust him.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, strength,
emy


Re: One More Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:36:35 PM AEST
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great write


Re: One More Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:53:06 PM AEST
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nice piece keep on writing




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