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Array ( [sid] => 69577 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Given up the bladE [time] => 2004-10-31 15:25:40 [hometext] => this is a song i wrote for someone i love i have the tabs on anothe link just im me and i will give it to who ever asks [bodytext] => When your eyes meet mine

They never invade

I am an open book

But you won’t have a look

Afraid to see that you

Really do love me the same

As I love you

When your hands meet mine

They are never cold

Never too bold

And always wanted

And always like you

Always haunting me

I can feel them caress my cheek

And slip from my hands as

As if we parted for all eternity

I always feel like I am close

To losing you

To losing everything

And falling apart

Because I don’t want to

Lose you heart

How can I get you to understand?

Without you I am just

Dead and walking the land

In a dark place that’s just

Worse than purgatory

Coz I am a cutter whose

Given up the blade

Given up my ways

To live for you

Like I promise to

And be everything to you

And give everything to you

Even what I don’t have

You already have the best of me

But I always feel like its

Never enough to

Repay all that you

Have done for me

I’m not enough not worthy

And sometimes feel

Like I will never be

But you still love me
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Given up the bladE

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:25:40 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

When your eyes meet mine

They never invade

I am an open book

But you won’t have a look

Afraid to see that you

Really do love me the same

As I love you

When your hands meet mine

They are never cold

Never too bold

And always wanted

And always like you

Always haunting me

I can feel them caress my cheek

And slip from my hands as

As if we parted for all eternity

I always feel like I am close

To losing you

To losing everything

And falling apart

Because I don’t want to

Lose you heart

How can I get you to understand?

Without you I am just

Dead and walking the land

In a dark place that’s just

Worse than purgatory

Coz I am a cutter whose

Given up the blade

Given up my ways

To live for you

Like I promise to

And be everything to you

And give everything to you

Even what I don’t have

You already have the best of me

But I always feel like its

Never enough to

Repay all that you

Have done for me

I’m not enough not worthy

And sometimes feel

Like I will never be

But you still love me

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-10-31 15:25:40]
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Re: Given up the bladE (User Rating: 1 )
by addicted2selfharm on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:36:59 PM AEST
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Vey pretty, and romantic. Nice job once again.

xCodi

Re: Given up the bladE (User Rating: 1 )
by lilracer37 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:55:15 PM AEST
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its perfect, i started cutting a few months ago and none of my friends could get me to stop because to me my life didnt matter to them, then i fell in love with the person i cant live without and for him i stopped cutting, i hope things r ok with u and him, well if u need to talk or something email me at lilracer37@hotmail.com

Shiloh

Re: Given up the bladE (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:17:26 PM AEST
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You can't stop cutting for anyone but yourself. Because if you stop for someone else, especially a bf/gf, as soon as they leave u, which more than likely will happen(sorry to be so blunt, but its true.), you'll fall right back into your old patterns again. You need to stop for youself.

Re: Given up the bladE (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:44:25 PM AEST
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great write. i agree with tiger fully.

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