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Array ( [sid] => 69556 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Finally die [time] => 2004-10-31 13:00:46 [hometext] => Ok,umm...hope u like, comment if u wanna [bodytext] => Finally this is my last breath
i've been taken over by death
my soul is gone
i am no more
thats why i lay sprawled on the floor
as i think of dying
i can't stop crying
i always said it wouldnt go this far
just a couple cuts
here and there
I swear
feeling so alone
i start to moan
still more blood
that causes a flood
on the white floor
it won't stop, more and more
as i say godbye
i finally...die [comments] => 4 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Swtpea92 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Finally die

Contributed by Swtpea92 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 01:00:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Finally this is my last breath
i've been taken over by death
my soul is gone
i am no more
thats why i lay sprawled on the floor
as i think of dying
i can't stop crying
i always said it wouldnt go this far
just a couple cuts
here and there
I swear
feeling so alone
i start to moan
still more blood
that causes a flood
on the white floor
it won't stop, more and more
as i say godbye
i finally...die

Copyright © Swtpea92 ... [ 2004-10-31 13:00:46]
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Re: Finally die (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 01:27:29 PM AEST
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very sad write, i can relate well,

takecare

pixie xx

Re: Finally die (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:27:24 PM AEST
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That was really good, a little short but very very meaningful.

-Kevin

Re: Finally die (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:26:22 PM AEST
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great write.

Re: Finally die (User Rating: 1 )
by THORN on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 06:01:02 AM AEST
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NIIIIIIIIIIICE!
But remember - poetry isn't all about rhyme, it's about feelings, in any which way they come out!
But that's fantastic rhyming, I wish I could rhyme like that lol
Great for your 1st poem, loved it ;)

Cheers,
-XRaye

PS: are you alright? :S you got me a little worried; it was so powerfully emotional...

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