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Loving The Storm
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:22:50 PM in AEST
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Thunder rolls
Through this hollow soul
And lightning flows
Through these veins
Like a war, it goes on
Like a war...it kills
Kills feelings
And suffocates conciousness
Coma takes hold
And darkness slips in
Screaming, sobbing
But light prevails
The light so beautiful
Like love
And love saves
When darkness seeps
Through lacerations
Caused by darkness
Love saves
When thunder collapses your soul
And love saves
When lightning
Shorts you out
Your love saved me
When darkness was closing its wounds
...My wounds
Like sun shining through storm clouds
Your love shone through me
And still shines
Copyright ©
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2004-10-29 20:22:50]
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by emocutie07 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:58:41 PM AEST
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| Breath takingly beautiful,..I wanted to think of something really clever to say, but it just left me absolutely speechless, just as all your others have ....all the usual hearts to you my luv |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:08:40 PM AEST
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| pretty good wish i came up with sumthing like that |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:26:47 AM AEST
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| I love happy endings..thanx |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:39:57 PM AEST
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| I like your poetry..PM me sometime |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:25:56 PM AEST
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It IS breathtaking!
Fantastic use of thunder and storm
expressing love.
--Mothy |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:07:38 PM AEST
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wow this was...I dont even have the words to say just know this it was great as a poem and it can be great as a song...keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 04:03:59 AM AEST
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beautifully worded work, well done.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:29:25 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. I love the ending.
Spazzo |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by namesaretaken on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:10:47 PM AEST
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A gentle touch will overcome rage and anger every time----
After reading this poem I will filled with a sense of peace and happiness
good stuff thanks
Nat |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:04:31 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. You have a way with words |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:52:42 AM AEST
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Beautifull! How strong the bond of love can be. Love really lifts the soul & carries one through many storms. Excellent write.
Nice job.
Corinna |
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Re: Loving The Storm
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 7th February 2011 @ 04:01:59 PM AEST
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| emotion is often as turbulent as the sea, or as erratic as a thunder storm. Great job expressing yourself, and how love makes you feel. I also have written several poems on love. |
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