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Holding me, Kissing me, Loving me.
I never felt more loved in my life!
A moment to cherish forever.
Real or not, it doesn't matter,
You, only you, hold the key to my heart.
That kiss, the most significant moment
of my life, a fleeting second in time
that changed my life forever.
That Kiss.
Was this just a fantasy, a wish, a dream?
A moment that holds my heart as
tight as a vise. A moment etched
forever into my memory. It feels so real.
My skin shivers at your touch.
Then, as you lean down to gently
kiss my lips again, the alarm awakens me.
My fantasy, My wish, My dream.
That Kiss.
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That Kiss

Contributed by mysticpoet on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:19:31 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Time stands still. There you are,
Holding me, Kissing me, Loving me.
I never felt more loved in my life!
A moment to cherish forever.
Real or not, it doesn't matter,
You, only you, hold the key to my heart.
That kiss, the most significant moment
of my life, a fleeting second in time
that changed my life forever.
That Kiss.
Was this just a fantasy, a wish, a dream?
A moment that holds my heart as
tight as a vise. A moment etched
forever into my memory. It feels so real.
My skin shivers at your touch.
Then, as you lean down to gently
kiss my lips again, the alarm awakens me.
My fantasy, My wish, My dream.
That Kiss.

Copyright © mysticpoet ... [ 2004-10-28 11:19:31]
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Re: That Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:30:40 AM AEST
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beautiful write, amazing,

pixie xx

Re: That Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Saz on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:31:14 AM AEST
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I'm really shocked I'm writing the FIRST comment on your poem!! It's brilliant!! I love it to bits!! You've descibed my deepest fantasy!! Thankyou!! Amzing how you have reached into my dreams and descibed so perfectly that which I have never had!! I'll be voting 5 stars!!!! **WELL DONE**

Re: That Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 02:19:56 PM AEST
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I love this! A perfect description of the emotion encountered in a beautiful moment that we've all had at some point. We go back to it a million times, replay it over and over again....because it can be so dreamy it's hard to tell the difference. Nice Write! Tiffany J. (Red_October)

Re: That Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:56:09 PM AEST
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that's beautiful. fantasies and dreams are so scary when they're that real.

Re: That Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by runaway0516 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:30:11 PM AEST
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i really...feel this poem...its how i feel...all the feelings i could never describe in words...nice ;)

Re: That Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by TedHuggableBare on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:31:37 PM AEST
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I feel that a kiss is the most passionate thing there is when it comes to love. A kiss is what leads us all down the many avenues that love has to offer. Loved the write!

Re: That Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:13:16 AM AEST
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Thank-you all for your comments--they are beautiful

Re: That Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:48:53 AM AEST
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Heavenly write.
In our dreams we get to win.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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