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[title] => Angels Cry
[time] => 2002-11-18 05:30:00
[hometext] => One of the hardest poems I ever had too write.
The Phantom
[bodytext] => I remember the first time I saw an angel cry,
May 18 2002, the sky was beauitiful, and blue,
That's the day I left for Korea, I was leaving everything I knew,
It was so clear, I was worried, and full of fear,
I didn't want to leave, but the orders came from above me,
The pain I felt, I couldn't show, but my love for you will always grow,
I felt alone and begain to shake, in your eyes I could see your heart break,
A rush of emotions shot through my body like an ice cold ocean,
A wounded heart, trapped in a soldiers soul,
Controling my tears, not allowing them to flow,
Staring into her eyes, finding it hard to say goodbye,
Giving her a kiss, now I can only reminisce,
Everynight I pray, hopeing I'll make it another day,
I close my eyes to sleep, my pillow soaked with tears I weep,
Memories fade, as I think of yesterday,
The pain will burn, until I return,
There I was about to say goodbye,
My wife and mother by my side,
I looked down at my little girl, she had tears in her eyes,
That's when I relized..... Angels cry.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
I miss you Kim, Dad.
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Angels Cry
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I remember the first time I saw an angel cry,
May 18 2002, the sky was beauitiful, and blue,
That's the day I left for Korea, I was leaving everything I knew,
It was so clear, I was worried, and full of fear,
I didn't want to leave, but the orders came from above me,
The pain I felt, I couldn't show, but my love for you will always grow,
I felt alone and begain to shake, in your eyes I could see your heart break,
A rush of emotions shot through my body like an ice cold ocean,
A wounded heart, trapped in a soldiers soul,
Controling my tears, not allowing them to flow,
Staring into her eyes, finding it hard to say goodbye,
Giving her a kiss, now I can only reminisce,
Everynight I pray, hopeing I'll make it another day,
I close my eyes to sleep, my pillow soaked with tears I weep,
Memories fade, as I think of yesterday,
The pain will burn, until I return,
There I was about to say goodbye,
My wife and mother by my side,
I looked down at my little girl, she had tears in her eyes,
That's when I relized..... Angels cry.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
I miss you Kim, Dad.
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2002-11-18 05:30:00]
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Re: Angels Cry
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 06:45:14 AM AEST
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This is so sad. It made me cry. Beautifully written really great. But so sad.
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Re: Angels Cry
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 07:02:54 AM AEST
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Awww Phantom, My heart goes out to you and your family.. I can only imagine how difficult a time this must be for you all to be away from each other for so long....
Beautiful and touching write..
Hugs
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Re: Angels Cry
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 07:37:27 AM AEST
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| This was so beautiful & So sad! My heart goes out to you! Christina |
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Re: Angels Cry
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 09:18:02 AM AEST
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| Very moving write ... I love the way it ends .... beautiful poem. |
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Re: Angels Cry
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by OreO on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 09:43:47 AM AEST
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I need more boxes of tissue now
This made me cry so hard, this is so
beautiful and sad and filled with such
beautiful love, Thank you so much for
sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Angels Cry
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 05:53:28 PM AEST
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Thank you everyone for taking the time to read and feel my pain, love, happiness, and heart break. As you know this is for my little girl. I love her. Thank you again.
The Phantom |
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Re: Angels Cry
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by PhantomsLDY on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:34:22 PM AEST
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Hey babe I know this was tough for you to write but it is beautiful. We love and miss you hope you come home soon.
PhantomsLDY |
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Re: Angels Cry
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by Arwen on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 02:07:22 AM AEST
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man! that was one heartbreaking peace, almost makes me wish i had some hidden reserve of magic, to get your whole family back together. I loved you poem...beautiful yet sooooo sad. I kinda got this image of what you were feeling in this paragraph.
"Everynight I pray, hopeing I'll make it another day,
I close my eyes to sleep, my pillow soaked with tears I weep,
Memories fade, as I think of yesterday,
The pain will burn, until I return."
Your pain won't go unnoticed rest assured. There IS a god out there and he IS listening. You guys will be in my prayers. Be strong Phantom :) Take care. |
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Re: Angels Cry
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by Kane on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 03:06:38 AM AEST
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Phantom you cease to amaze me, another great write. I can see you love your little girl very much.
Kane
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Re: Angels Cry
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by PhantomsBBYgrl on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 12:31:11 AM AEST
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Dad I really love this poem! I love you alot also! I really wish that you could be here with us everyday that you are gone! Love you lots!
PhantomsBBYgrl |
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