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[sid] => 69138
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Writhing
[time] => 2004-10-27 22:31:16
[hometext] => I included this one in my portfolio for creative writing and received a good mark, now I want YOUR opinion lol...thanks
[bodytext] => Empty screams from a writhing creature emptying life beside this knife. Torn, broken, beaten features break promises of broken life. Emptying life beside this knife, screaming incoherently of pain. Break promises of broken life, seizures of fear rule again. Screaming incoherently of pain she digs it deeper inside. Seizures of fear rule again but there's no more ways to hide. She digs it deeper inside root out the demon she knows. But there's no more ways to hide, her crumbling wall shows. Root out the demon she knows; torn, broken, beaten features. Her crumbling wall shows empty screams from a writhing creature. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 13 [informant] => waos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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