Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	10-June 20:50:57 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 68842 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Halloween Show 2 [time] => 2004-10-25 18:35:53 [hometext] => Second part [bodytext] => For those of you
who choose to go
the haunted house
is quite a show.
Cobwebs streaming,
pillars high,
bats fly constantly
watch the sky.
Now take a breath
and walk on through
freaky fun
just waits for you.
The creaky stairwell
circles round,
hold your tounge
don't make a sound.
The howl you heard
will soon be here
blood thirsty warewolves
coming near.
So to your left
go through the door,
we lost someone...that ups my score.

SHHHHH........

I'm sure he's fine
don't cry my dear
the creatures here
can smell all fear.

SIR!!
DON'T TOUCH THE CAGE
YOU'LL LET IT OUT!
please dear girl
try not to shout.
Keep moving
strobelights all in fun
I promise you
we're almost done.
Don't mind the blood
I'm sure it's fake

MMMMMMM
Smell the bodies bake.
OOPS
HAHAHAHA
It's just a joke.
There, see the stars
we made it through
step lively now
there's more to do. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 18 [informant] => Gimpie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Holiday Poetry )

Halloween Show 2

Contributed by Gimpie on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 06:35:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Holiday Poetry

For those of you
who choose to go
the haunted house
is quite a show.
Cobwebs streaming,
pillars high,
bats fly constantly
watch the sky.
Now take a breath
and walk on through
freaky fun
just waits for you.
The creaky stairwell
circles round,
hold your tounge
don't make a sound.
The howl you heard
will soon be here
blood thirsty warewolves
coming near.
So to your left
go through the door,
we lost someone...that ups my score.

SHHHHH........

I'm sure he's fine
don't cry my dear
the creatures here
can smell all fear.

SIR!!
DON'T TOUCH THE CAGE
YOU'LL LET IT OUT!
please dear girl
try not to shout.
Keep moving
strobelights all in fun
I promise you
we're almost done.
Don't mind the blood
I'm sure it's fake

MMMMMMM
Smell the bodies bake.
OOPS
HAHAHAHA
It's just a joke.
There, see the stars
we made it through
step lively now
there's more to do.

Copyright © Gimpie ... [ 2004-10-25 18:35:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Halloween Show 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:52:50 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Lmao!! Loved this..thanks for sharing.....
"Smell the bodies bake.
OOPS
HAHAHAHA""
lol

Jenni

Re: Halloween Show 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by goater on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 03:32:26 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Sounds like an ebulliant yet rather morbid account of the alter-ego images in the imagination of someone who escapes the effects of concurrent stress. The ancient Greeks used art, mainly theatrical, to satisfy emotional needs and thus maintaining the beginnings of democracy amid a warlike society.

This poem appears, in my view , to be a classic example of emotional discharge expressed through contrapunctal paradox and metaphors, from a well intentioned person, despite it's dark, gloomy yet almost child-like pathos.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com