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Taking your last breath
have you felt so eaten up by misery
there is nothing left
have you ever felt like crying
but the tears no longer pour
your so used to the pain
you barley feel anymore
Have you ever felt so helpless
like you dont have a clue
you hate the changes happening
but theres nothin you can do
have you ever felt so all alone
like everyones blind to you
even in a room full of people
your still lonely too
have you ever felt so hopeless
you had no faith to grasp
nothing to believe in
just a hurt that would ever last
have you ever felt so weak
you had no strength inside
you felt purley vulnerable
but had no place to hide
have you ever felt so lost
thinking you'd never find your way
wandering in the darkness
with no sun to light your day
have you ever felt so scared
not knowing the reason for your fright
when ur consumed by all of this
theres no reason left to fight [comments] => 4 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 48 [informant] => girlg0newrong [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Have you

Contributed by girlg0newrong on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 06:30:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Have you ever felt like dying
Taking your last breath
have you felt so eaten up by misery
there is nothing left
have you ever felt like crying
but the tears no longer pour
your so used to the pain
you barley feel anymore
Have you ever felt so helpless
like you dont have a clue
you hate the changes happening
but theres nothin you can do
have you ever felt so all alone
like everyones blind to you
even in a room full of people
your still lonely too
have you ever felt so hopeless
you had no faith to grasp
nothing to believe in
just a hurt that would ever last
have you ever felt so weak
you had no strength inside
you felt purley vulnerable
but had no place to hide
have you ever felt so lost
thinking you'd never find your way
wandering in the darkness
with no sun to light your day
have you ever felt so scared
not knowing the reason for your fright
when ur consumed by all of this
theres no reason left to fight

Copyright © girlg0newrong ... [ 2004-10-25 18:30:05]
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Re: Have you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 07:26:29 PM AEST
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wow, well expressed... i can relate to this poem very much.. i wish i had some words of encouragement but i am in the same boat as you and gave up caring about much of anything anymore... all i can say is hold on, thats what i will be trying to do.

Re: Have you (User Rating: 1 )
by teagy03 on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 07:35:05 PM AEST
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Stay strong. A very emotional write, I can relate, it is so strong, yet endearing.

Re: Have you (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 08:51:06 PM AEST
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excellent write. yes to all of these =[

Re: Have you (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:18:59 PM AEST
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
I really loved this poem
Beautifully written

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