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Array ( [sid] => 68831 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shes Gone. [time] => 2004-10-25 17:40:28 [hometext] => Written during a bad time..might not be the best, but expressed me very well at the time. Please comment. [bodytext] => She watched the sun go down,
Knowing it would be the last one shed ever see,
She couldn`t help but frown,
For she wished so hard she could change this life around.

She stole a look at the clock,
It was almost time,
She pushed the lock,
Her life seemed more worthless than a dime

She sat down on her bed
And picked up her knife
The blood started to shed,
She had just taken her life.

In those last few moments,
She felt no pain,
She just insanely watched,
As her blood dropped like rain.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 36 [informant] => EVERxSOxSWEET [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Shes Gone.

Contributed by EVERxSOxSWEET on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 05:40:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She watched the sun go down,
Knowing it would be the last one shed ever see,
She couldn`t help but frown,
For she wished so hard she could change this life around.

She stole a look at the clock,
It was almost time,
She pushed the lock,
Her life seemed more worthless than a dime

She sat down on her bed
And picked up her knife
The blood started to shed,
She had just taken her life.

In those last few moments,
She felt no pain,
She just insanely watched,
As her blood dropped like rain.

Copyright © EVERxSOxSWEET ... [ 2004-10-25 17:40:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Shes Gone. (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 12:38:43 PM AEST
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great poem, you expressed your emotions so well... if you ever need anyone to talk to you can pm me... I know what you are going thru...
~screwup

Re: Shes Gone. (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:24:21 PM AEST
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i hate when people try to kill myself but why don't people talk about what's wrong.

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