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Array ( [sid] => 6874 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => For Shadow [time] => 2002-11-17 15:00:00 [hometext] => I wrote this one about the man I'm now in love with. But at the point in time this poem was written about is when I considered him one of my bestfriends. He's still my bestfriend. This is about all the things he's done for me. When I met him, I'd not been writing for five years. In the three years I've known him, he has gotten me to write again. And I am very greatful. [bodytext] => For many years I could not write
Too many things in my life wasn't right
But then one day I met you
My life changed for the better, that's so true
You have been such a great friend to me
When I've needed you most; you've canceled plans for me
Those things I never had to ask of you
When I was down you knew just what to do
When you were needed, you were always there
You helped me with everything, even what color I should dye my hair
You came into my life when I needed a friend
And now because of you, I've started writing again
I'll never be able to express, how grateful I am to you
You have brought back to me, the very thing I love to do
Now because of you once again I'm writing
I'm writing poetry, short stories, a novel everything
Now once again I am happy
And I know all of this sounds kind of sappy
Shadow, I have you to thank for everything
You have brought back to me my writing
I've got you to thank for my new situation
Shadow, you are my inspiration [comments] => 6 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 37 [informant] => ShadowsCloud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ThankYouPoems )
For Shadow

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems



For many years I could not write
Too many things in my life wasn't right
But then one day I met you
My life changed for the better, that's so true
You have been such a great friend to me
When I've needed you most; you've canceled plans for me
Those things I never had to ask of you
When I was down you knew just what to do
When you were needed, you were always there
You helped me with everything, even what color I should dye my hair
You came into my life when I needed a friend
And now because of you, I've started writing again
I'll never be able to express, how grateful I am to you
You have brought back to me, the very thing I love to do
Now because of you once again I'm writing
I'm writing poetry, short stories, a novel everything
Now once again I am happy
And I know all of this sounds kind of sappy
Shadow, I have you to thank for everything
You have brought back to me my writing
I've got you to thank for my new situation
Shadow, you are my inspiration




Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-11-17 15:00:00]
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Re: For Shadow (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 06:49:22 PM AEST
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I think that this really expresses how this guy has helped you over come something bad in your life.


Re: For Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:18:14 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem..and tribute to your friend..I know the feelings exactly.. I subbed a poem today about this.. it's called "The Inspiration Behind"..
Jenni


Re: For Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 11:44:01 AM AEST
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This is EXCELLENT Candice,
You're both such very lucky people to have each other as friends! Maybe more soon?
Not 'sappy' at all, though it did rhyme. It all flowed really well.
Very lovely indeed and very well written!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: For Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 11:50:50 AM AEST
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Dean, I think that we are ever lucky to be friends. And I am hoping to be more soon. I really didn't think that it was 'sappy' either but I couldn't think of anything else that would rhyme and really go. I think that is was I meant to say.
ShadowsCloud


Re: For Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 11:57:03 AM AEST
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Well Candice,
It worked, to rhyme and it is a really good expression of your feelings of gratitude!
Well done.

With love
Dean:-)


Re: For Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 12:00:25 PM AEST
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Dean, I am glad you like it. He hasn't seen it yet. But I am pretty sure that he will like. He has liked every one poem of my that he has read. He has been very good for my self-esteem.
ShadowsCloud




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