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Array ( [sid] => 68722 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Thought You'd Be Here Forever [time] => 2004-10-24 20:37:36 [hometext] => Critique and comments deeply appreciated. [bodytext] => The worst is over now
Everything's not as bad as it seems
These lies seemed
So cliched
I remember when I cried the day away
I remember watching you
Standing in the rain
So still
On the last day

I wanted you to be happy
I wanted to see you smiling
That last day,
I felt like dying
The last day
The worst day
The start of my lonliness

Now I see you again
And the tears are chasing me
I tried to run away
But they only came so much faster
I can't stand this pain
I know it hasn't gotten better
I know you're happy there

Do you think that I don't realize
I am not missed at all?
Can't you see,
it feels as if everything's my fault?

I thought it would all get better
I thought the pain would subside
I wanted you to be happy
I didn't know I would still feel this pain
[comments] => 0 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 16 [informant] => iluvpencils [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
I Thought You'd Be Here Forever

Contributed by iluvpencils on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:37:36 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



The worst is over now
Everything's not as bad as it seems
These lies seemed
So cliched
I remember when I cried the day away
I remember watching you
Standing in the rain
So still
On the last day

I wanted you to be happy
I wanted to see you smiling
That last day,
I felt like dying
The last day
The worst day
The start of my lonliness

Now I see you again
And the tears are chasing me
I tried to run away
But they only came so much faster
I can't stand this pain
I know it hasn't gotten better
I know you're happy there

Do you think that I don't realize
I am not missed at all?
Can't you see,
it feels as if everything's my fault?

I thought it would all get better
I thought the pain would subside
I wanted you to be happy
I didn't know I would still feel this pain




Copyright © iluvpencils ... [ 2004-10-24 20:37:36]
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