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Sounds good to me
On the golden sand
A bucket in my hand

Swimming in the sea
Sounds good to me
Big blue waves
I like to sunbathe

Looking for shells
Sounds good to me
The crabs run away
I could stay here all day!!
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A Day At The Beach

Contributed by footiebabe on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:01:15 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

A day at the beach
Sounds good to me
On the golden sand
A bucket in my hand

Swimming in the sea
Sounds good to me
Big blue waves
I like to sunbathe

Looking for shells
Sounds good to me
The crabs run away
I could stay here all day!!

Copyright © footiebabe ... [ 2004-10-24 07:01:15]
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Re: A Day At The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:04:23 AM AEST
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Sounds good to me, sorry couldn't resist lol. I love this, its light and fun, if you know what I mean. Hope you had a good time

Take Care
- Becca

Re: A Day At The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:12:58 AM AEST
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I dont remember you doing much sunbathing, you wouldn't come out of the water lol

Another good poem, I like the repetitive style of "sounds good to me"

Well done

Love Dawny (aka mum)

Re: A Day At The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:27:40 AM AEST
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always loved the beach, swimming body boarding surfing, lol burning, that part hurt the most, but worth the golden tan, Awesome poem, reminded me of much I love the beach, cant wait for summer now, you have a beautiful talent for recreating past events and making them feel so real, cool poem, thanks for sharing so I may read.

Re: A Day At The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:58:57 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle,

Wow!! You're good at this aren't you? Another great poem, you got talent girly, keep up the good work.

Love Ali xx

Re: A Day At The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:37:42 PM AEST
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"whilst" that just cracked me up! hehehe what a breath of fresh air you are, Michelle.

I like this poem. Hope you get to the beach as often as it please you.

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: A Day At The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:37:36 PM AEST
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your poetry is like a breath of fresh air, warm welcome to ypdc, i hope to read many more from you, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: A Day At The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 04:24:51 PM AEST
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Absolutely adorable write...... I love the beach too....and used to spend all day there when I was your age..My Mom used to bring us our Sunday lunch there...cuz we never wanted to come out to go home to eat...lol
Jenni

Re: A Day At The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:07:07 AM AEST
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Yes. Lets Go To The Beach.

Re: A Day At The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 09:08:51 AM AEST
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Wow this is very good poem i love hte beach.

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