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It's time to go home
But where do I go
What do I do
I feel so alone

Mom says, come on
You can stay over here
Thankyou Mom
But I'm so out of place there

I don't even feel comfortable
In my own skin
How do I explain
Where do I begin

I have never felt as though I belong
Why am I so weak
Why can't I be strong

I just want it all to end
When you open your heart
To what you thought was a friend
Only to be betrayed
Your whole life begins to fade

Again my heart has been broken
It will never be the same
I don't know how long
I can deal with this pain

I never wanted to hurt anyone
Sorry I've been here so long
But things will get better
For soon I'll be gone

Please believe me when I say
All will be better when I'm not here
Please try to forgive me
And shed only one tear.
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SOMEONE TO BELIEVE IN

Contributed by Evilnn on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 03:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Well the time has come
It's time to go home
But where do I go
What do I do
I feel so alone

Mom says, come on
You can stay over here
Thankyou Mom
But I'm so out of place there

I don't even feel comfortable
In my own skin
How do I explain
Where do I begin

I have never felt as though I belong
Why am I so weak
Why can't I be strong

I just want it all to end
When you open your heart
To what you thought was a friend
Only to be betrayed
Your whole life begins to fade

Again my heart has been broken
It will never be the same
I don't know how long
I can deal with this pain

I never wanted to hurt anyone
Sorry I've been here so long
But things will get better
For soon I'll be gone

Please believe me when I say
All will be better when I'm not here
Please try to forgive me
And shed only one tear.

Copyright © Evilnn ... [ 2004-10-23 15:31:35]
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Re: SOMEONE TO BELIEVE IN (User Rating: 1 )
by alyssakoren_03 on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 03:46:03 PM AEST
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excelent first poem here i hope there is more to come.......so many times i have felt the same

Re: SOMEONE TO BELIEVE IN (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 05:43:03 PM AEST
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Deeply written... we all need to write to let our feelings out. Keep the ink flowing.... it helps..
Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net...

Hugs
Jenni

Re: SOMEONE TO BELIEVE IN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:41:24 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written. Poetry is such a blessing. It sure
helps to cement your emotion. Makes it real, so you can deal with it.
I really liked this, but especially...

"I don't even feel comfortable
In my own skin
How do I explain
Where do I begin"

I think a lot of us can relate to that.
Keep up the great work.

~Breezy

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