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Array ( [sid] => 68515 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wanting you [time] => 2004-10-22 21:45:37 [hometext] => any suggestions for a title would be really appreciated. :) [bodytext] => Emotions can be bottled though they eventually come forth
Burning brighter than the sun
like a beacon on a port

All too often frightening they can harbor many thoughts
The equivalent to tiny fish
That just never can be bought

MY feelings, blunt and true, scare me straight into my soul
For something now has taken shape
Where once there was a hole

That emptiness was comforting for there never was a change
No twists or bends, or curves
That now can make me feel deranged

Yet there is something wonderful in feelings all anew
For I realize that all I want
Is nothing short of you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Gimpie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Wanting you

Contributed by Gimpie on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:45:37 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Emotions can be bottled though they eventually come forth
Burning brighter than the sun
like a beacon on a port

All too often frightening they can harbor many thoughts
The equivalent to tiny fish
That just never can be bought

MY feelings, blunt and true, scare me straight into my soul
For something now has taken shape
Where once there was a hole

That emptiness was comforting for there never was a change
No twists or bends, or curves
That now can make me feel deranged

Yet there is something wonderful in feelings all anew
For I realize that all I want
Is nothing short of you.

Copyright © Gimpie ... [ 2004-10-22 21:45:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wanting you (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:10:59 PM AEST
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fantastic write. maybe the title could be wanting you...i guess?

Re: Wanting you (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:24:41 PM AEST
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good write..great in fact. What about

Filling the Emptiness.
The Change is You?
Nothing Short of You..
Feelings All Anew?
What I realize?

I'll stop now..

Re: Wanting you (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 12:35:35 AM AEST
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Good write. maybe the title could be: All i want is you.

Jane

Re: Wanting you (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:15:00 AM AEST
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its really a beautiful write
wish some one i knew would make her
feelings for me that clear well i guess i liked

The Change is You?

from one of the previous posts

Re: Wanting you (User Rating: 1 )
by MayaByrd on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:56:09 AM AEST
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just a suggestion: a certain sensation, my realization...? :-)

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