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Array ( [sid] => 68451 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => pleasure rooms [time] => 2004-10-22 13:19:11 [hometext] => inspired from the live club on juice f.m....i love these RAVIN TUNES!!!! WOOOOOOOOOO! [bodytext] => take me away
a million miles away
take me higher
high as i can be
take me away
a place for you and me
rave to the music
swear to the crouds
paul oh telling us to get loud
sweat flying around
HEAR THE MUSIC
FEEL IT VIBRATING THROUGH THE GROUND
the vodka shots swigging
drunken dancers DANCE
hit the floor
direct to the roof
rock the place
sweat dripping down YA face
feel the beats
running through my soul
dance!
im the kinda girl who has got alot to say
but all i wanna do now is is is is is is
DANCE
DANCE
all my love
set this place on fire
PLEASURE ROOMS........THEY TAKING YOU HIGHER
turn it up
ya ears bleeding
bop ya heads
rock ya feet
PLEASURE ROOMS COMMING THROUGH WITH THEIR BRAND NEW BEAT!
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

pleasure rooms

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 01:19:11 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

take me away
a million miles away
take me higher
high as i can be
take me away
a place for you and me
rave to the music
swear to the crouds
paul oh telling us to get loud
sweat flying around
HEAR THE MUSIC
FEEL IT VIBRATING THROUGH THE GROUND
the vodka shots swigging
drunken dancers DANCE
hit the floor
direct to the roof
rock the place
sweat dripping down YA face
feel the beats
running through my soul
dance!
im the kinda girl who has got alot to say
but all i wanna do now is is is is is is
DANCE
DANCE
all my love
set this place on fire
PLEASURE ROOMS........THEY TAKING YOU HIGHER
turn it up
ya ears bleeding
bop ya heads
rock ya feet
PLEASURE ROOMS COMMING THROUGH WITH THEIR BRAND NEW BEAT!

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-10-22 13:19:11]
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Re: pleasure rooms (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:27:10 PM AEST
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Party girl
You describe nicely the joyful feeline of dance and music.
I don't know where juice fm is but it sounds like a cool radio station. Bump gurl bump

Sinned

Re: pleasure rooms (User Rating: 1 )
by troubled on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 02:06:26 PM AEST
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very good

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