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Until I Tore
Contributed by
Deleterious_Dislike
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:03:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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what I wrote upon your eyes
has been smeared from left to right
That of I wispered to your heart
Has vanished out of sight
And tell me why
my begotten cure
of healing no more
poisoning for
and sore
I'm so not sure
whom you adore
Is me therefore
My core
has tore
into shreds
No more little secrets
sweet little angel
No more hidden wants
or you I will dispel
And tell me this
it just cant be right
so full of spite
hold tight
i just might
push from this height
how can you write?
so much at night
with such a bite
despite
Me bleeding like this
I'll miss your tender heart
It was of a different brand
its a shame It's now so still
and bleeding in my hand
Its far too late to say
I wish you had explained
How you kept me drained
tamed
inflamed and blamed
through strained
emotion claimed
the cause I was named
I was ashamed
of something I hadnt done
You thought you had won
until I tore out your heart
until I tore it apart
whilst still
you were breathing
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Re: Until I Tore
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by CaddishCut on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:06:49 PM AEST
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| I love it. Very emotional, and well thought out. |
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Re: Until I Tore
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by TaintedOptomist on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:49:33 PM AEST
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| i dig it. beautiful. |
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Re: Until I Tore
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:46:40 AM AEST
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| wow |
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Re: Until I Tore
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by Cindy359 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 05:08:04 PM AEST
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So much emotions here. Well written, hope to see more in the future..
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