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[sid] => 68208
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Thrill Ride
[time] => 2004-10-20 13:24:57
[hometext] => i feel i have to explain this poem: it was written whilst i was anticipating a trip to the fun fair with my boyfriend, and this was where he finally ended it
[bodytext] => together we need so much courage to go on as the ride begins i'm nervous but i see you sitting by my side it starts off slowly, but soon speeds up i am smiling you are with me we go so high and drop down so low my stomach churns you are still here i sometimes feel sick i scream i am so anxious you are beside me every corner brings a new surprise something unexpected but exciting you are there lots more twists and turns you are sharing every moment with me and i feel so happy to feel what i am feeling and then it begins to slow down, everything is now so different you give me one last look the brakes are put on, finally we reach the sad end, you and i go our seperate ways alone. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 22 [informant] => clotti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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