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Array ( [sid] => 68075 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You'll Be All Right [time] => 2004-10-19 13:07:45 [hometext] => I wrote this a while ago and just recently found it while going through some old notebooks. For you, Carrie. I love you. [bodytext] => A dismal, darkened day
A sad, sickened soul
Cries to see yours
To see your eyes
And hold you tight
To calm your fears
You'll be all right

A weak, wailing whisper
A heavy, healing heart
Cries to yours
And with it sighs
To hold you tight
And dry your tears
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You'll Be All Right

Contributed by wachumiri on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:07:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A dismal, darkened day
A sad, sickened soul
Cries to see yours
To see your eyes
And hold you tight
To calm your fears
You'll be all right

A weak, wailing whisper
A heavy, healing heart
Cries to yours
And with it sighs
To hold you tight
And dry your tears
We'll be all right

Copyright © wachumiri ... [ 2004-10-19 13:07:45]
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Re: You'll Be All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:11:26 PM AEST
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awww a sweet write,lovely

pixie xx

Re: You'll Be All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:16:03 PM AEST
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this is lovely David *hugs*
I know it will calm carrie's heart

Re: You'll Be All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 04:21:29 PM AEST
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Hmmm...I wonder when you wrote that and what the purpose behind it was? I don't know. Well, I'll just leave it to probability and say that it was your fault. Hahaha. I love you. The alliterations were really beautiful. Creative. Nicely done, beloved.
~Ceima~

Re: You'll Be All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 03:15:11 AM AEST
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I smell alliteration! Don't you know that's a crime?

Good structure, though. *pats on head*

Andrew

Re: You'll Be All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:35:19 AM AEST
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I've had those days and this was a nice comforting little write. Cheers!

Re: You'll Be All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:26:26 AM AEST
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Another breathtaking poem. So full of love and tenderness.

Re: You'll Be All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 03:11:21 AM AEST
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You actually could say this to any one who is felling down. But it appropriate to dedicate it to one you love.

Re: You'll Be All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:15:24 PM AEST
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Beautifully said as always dearest David. With each write I get drawn into ur world. Carrie would've surely loved this one.
*hugs*
Sue

Re: You'll Be All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by EcuaOrgullo310 on Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 12:51:57 PM AEST
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that's really sweet...
tee hee.. I love Carrie too. :)
Very heart warming.
with a tinge of sadness.

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