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Array ( [sid] => 68010 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Promise [time] => 2004-10-18 23:10:00 [hometext] => Its acually a combination of dark and sad and truth be told, its my real feeling, i let myself down and im slipping too far away to even bear my own trust anymore. I keep letting people down, even when they didnt deserve it. *crying* I need serious help! [bodytext] => How do i keep getting
myself in so deep?
How am i letting
myself slip so far down.

Hanging onto the cliff,
in which im about to fall off,
is it too late to say sorry,
and that we can work it out?

Why am i built up,
to the piont where i cant breakdown?
Who can i turn to,
if i keep letting people go?

Please someone,
qiut saying its okay,
qiut telling me what to do,
and where to go.

Serious emotions stir,
im lettin more and more
people down.
Alone, i am the broken promise.

For me, there lies no future.
I cannot see beyond
my mistakes
and hiding behind the lies.

Shattered dreams
and battered hopes,
again i runaway.
Where have i left to go? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 13 [informant] => srugglingyoungster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Broken Promise

Contributed by srugglingyoungster on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 11:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

How do i keep getting
myself in so deep?
How am i letting
myself slip so far down.

Hanging onto the cliff,
in which im about to fall off,
is it too late to say sorry,
and that we can work it out?

Why am i built up,
to the piont where i cant breakdown?
Who can i turn to,
if i keep letting people go?

Please someone,
qiut saying its okay,
qiut telling me what to do,
and where to go.

Serious emotions stir,
im lettin more and more
people down.
Alone, i am the broken promise.

For me, there lies no future.
I cannot see beyond
my mistakes
and hiding behind the lies.

Shattered dreams
and battered hopes,
again i runaway.
Where have i left to go?

Copyright © srugglingyoungster ... [ 2004-10-18 23:10:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Broken Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 04:25:28 AM AEST
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thiz iz gr8!!! i love it, keep it up!

Re: Broken Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by TeRrahiel on Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 03:39:16 PM AEST
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That is really great though I'm on the "other side" - I was let down a few days ago and you helped me see the thing on the other hand.

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