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Array ( [sid] => 67890 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In love with the Devil [time] => 2004-10-18 03:45:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You want our souls to be interwoven
into the flawless silk night sky
to whisper in the darkness
like the flirting lights of fireflies
wouldn't the thought be so lovely
wouldn't we be in bliss
so its a shame that your really the demon
and I am in love with your kiss


You crept into me like a disease
festering and waiting
all along the take over
you sat plotting and anticipating
Slowly you took my heart
for you and only you to keep
you said you would look after it
but instead you let it weep
you sat it down in a stagnant pool
mutilating it with lies
all the while smiling and grinning
looking into my eyes

It is too late for me to go
I am tainted and full of your parasite
So I let my self be taken over
by you, the demon of the night

and now that I am yours alone
in this morbid love affair
do you really still think
we make a beautiful pair?

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Rxqueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
In love with the Devil

Contributed by Rxqueen on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:45:44 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



You want our souls to be interwoven
into the flawless silk night sky
to whisper in the darkness
like the flirting lights of fireflies
wouldn't the thought be so lovely
wouldn't we be in bliss
so its a shame that your really the demon
and I am in love with your kiss


You crept into me like a disease
festering and waiting
all along the take over
you sat plotting and anticipating
Slowly you took my heart
for you and only you to keep
you said you would look after it
but instead you let it weep
you sat it down in a stagnant pool
mutilating it with lies
all the while smiling and grinning
looking into my eyes

It is too late for me to go
I am tainted and full of your parasite
So I let my self be taken over
by you, the demon of the night

and now that I am yours alone
in this morbid love affair
do you really still think
we make a beautiful pair?





Copyright © Rxqueen ... [ 2004-10-18 03:45:44]
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Re: In love with the Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:13:33 PM AEST
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OMG!!! This was excellent!!!!! REALLY REALLY EXCELLENT!!!!!
This truly blows my mind. Perfectly described and what wonderful word choices.
Great job!!

Boy do I relate....

~Breezy


Re: In love with the Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:24:00 PM AEST
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This was great. Sweet one your talent is true...never give up!

Your #1 Fan


Re: In love with the Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 10:33:35 AM AEST
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This is stunning, and I am so sorry that people haven't been commenting on it, It could have just been a bad day, I am also sorry I missed this.
This is worth a definate '5''
The flow is stunning and I couldn't stop reading, and the words just seem to work together perfectly.
I adore this.
I wouldn't change any of it.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: In love with the Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:27:54 PM AEST
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The first stanza really
captured my interest.

The second stanza
only intensified it.

An excellent poem.

--Mothy


Re: In love with the Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by TeRrahiel on Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 03:43:46 PM AEST
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Absolutely perfect. In my opinion, it should be turned into a metal song:) And then it would be a great success.




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