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Array ( [sid] => 67670 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => part 4 of 13HALLOWEEN HORRORS [time] => 2004-10-16 09:11:09 [hometext] => please comment [bodytext] => a shot gun blasted in mid day,
nothing was ever so quiet as today,
tempting me to lock the door,
gun blasts heard once more,
i thought nothing of it and made up the bed,
im alone but i swear someone said,
'your dead',
i shrugged it off,shook with a cough,
it was someone hunting thats all,
i turned and saw something on the wall,
what could it be?
a bloody message someone left for me!
smeared it said 'you're dead'
i screamed and ran to get a knife,
i fear for my life,it said you're dead,
with my knife in hand i ran to my bed,
thinking,what do i do?i dont have a phone i am all alone,
trembling in fear,i hear someone near,
curtains blowing , i walked to the window to close it once again,
was it already open?did they get in?
who is it?what is it?how could this be?,
who on this earth would want to kill me?,
a reply from behind you 'ill set you free',
before the chance to scream it ended like a dream,
i awoke from this slumber,i shook of the chill,
something felt so verry real,what a nice impression,
my dreams are my obsession,
i look and there is a question on the wall,
'were you ever asleep at all?',
i quivered in shock of this,
i loud noise in the backroom,
i ran to see,
someone shot me,
in my head,
now im dead,
better this way now others believe what i say,
when i warn from beyond the grave,
what ever it is you crave to know,
if you ever hear a weird noise just dont go.

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part 4 of 13HALLOWEEN HORRORS

Contributed by blackholesun on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:11:09 AM in AEST
Topic: Holiday Poetry



a shot gun blasted in mid day,
nothing was ever so quiet as today,
tempting me to lock the door,
gun blasts heard once more,
i thought nothing of it and made up the bed,
im alone but i swear someone said,
'your dead',
i shrugged it off,shook with a cough,
it was someone hunting thats all,
i turned and saw something on the wall,
what could it be?
a bloody message someone left for me!
smeared it said 'you're dead'
i screamed and ran to get a knife,
i fear for my life,it said you're dead,
with my knife in hand i ran to my bed,
thinking,what do i do?i dont have a phone i am all alone,
trembling in fear,i hear someone near,
curtains blowing , i walked to the window to close it once again,
was it already open?did they get in?
who is it?what is it?how could this be?,
who on this earth would want to kill me?,
a reply from behind you 'ill set you free',
before the chance to scream it ended like a dream,
i awoke from this slumber,i shook of the chill,
something felt so verry real,what a nice impression,
my dreams are my obsession,
i look and there is a question on the wall,
'were you ever asleep at all?',
i quivered in shock of this,
i loud noise in the backroom,
i ran to see,
someone shot me,
in my head,
now im dead,
better this way now others believe what i say,
when i warn from beyond the grave,
what ever it is you crave to know,
if you ever hear a weird noise just dont go.





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Re: part 4 of 13HALLOWEEN HORRORS (User Rating: 1 )
by shanarah on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:38:24 AM AEST
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you attained a great thriller out of this. made me tense. i liked it.
take care,
shanarah...


Re: part 4 of 13HALLOWEEN HORRORS (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 10:17:13 AM AEST
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I love your Halloween poems. They are so freaking awesome. I could never think of thethings you do. You are an excellent writer. I loved this one just like the last. Cna't wait to read the next!!!!!!!!


Re: part 4 of 13HALLOWEEN HORRORS (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 01:36:11 PM AEST
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Another TERRORIFFIC installment!

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--Mothy




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