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[aid] => mick
[title] => Limbo
[time] => 2004-10-14 21:40:28
[hometext] => It’s been a while, but here is another poem. Any comments or advice about this or any other of my poems would be appreciated greatly.
[bodytext] => More time has passed, My feeling, more tangled than before. I don't feel the pain, And yet I still do. The pain is different now. The pain is the pain of the Unknown. It is not a pain as you would see it on the outside, The pain is more complicated. I don't think you could understand The hurt I feel. It is not the the hurt from "him" anymore, Rather it is the hurt from the miles between us. I still do not want to call, Save once or twice in a week or two. I do not want you to know my pain, But yet somehow I feel you must. I sit here in Limbo, Not knowing what to do. No one can tell me What I should do about me and you. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 22 [informant] => randomguy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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