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Oh! No!
This time I've really done it
I lost my grip on reality
Disillusioned
Confused
Baffled
Time out for me
Where's my Padded Cell?

I'm the Nut~Hut
The Loony Bin
The Funny Farm
I finally made it to Crazy City
I'm an A-1 Whack Job
The best of the best
The worst of the worst
Where's my Padded Cell?

Dr.! Dr.! Can't you help me?
I've gone off the Deep End
My mind went into Orbit
How can I find my way back?
I yell
I scream
Some one save me
Where's my padded cell
I kick
I bite
I scratch
I lash-out
But all to no avail
Still they pin me down
The buckles click
The buttons snap
The needle goes
The meds come out
Darkness
Sweet oblivion
Just me & my padded cell!

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Padded Cell

Contributed by skyblumoon on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:47:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Oops
Oh! No!
This time I've really done it
I lost my grip on reality
Disillusioned
Confused
Baffled
Time out for me
Where's my Padded Cell?

I'm the Nut~Hut
The Loony Bin
The Funny Farm
I finally made it to Crazy City
I'm an A-1 Whack Job
The best of the best
The worst of the worst
Where's my Padded Cell?

Dr.! Dr.! Can't you help me?
I've gone off the Deep End
My mind went into Orbit
How can I find my way back?
I yell
I scream
Some one save me
Where's my padded cell
I kick
I bite
I scratch
I lash-out
But all to no avail
Still they pin me down
The buckles click
The buttons snap
The needle goes
The meds come out
Darkness
Sweet oblivion
Just me & my padded cell!

Copyright © skyblumoon ... [ 2004-10-14 12:47:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Padded Cell (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:29:39 PM AEST
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lol. this was humorous, it reminded me of some songs like "doctor doctor give me the news" and "theyre coming to take me away haha, hoho, hehe,haha, to the funny farm...." that last one made people commit suicide though =/ i always wondered what crazy was compared to since there isnt exactly a normal...

great write. i liked how this changed its tone from funny to serious. not many can do such a change in so few lines. i like the song like quality to some of this too.

Re: Padded Cell (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:55:35 AM AEST
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*grin* oh if only i could put the padded walls in my room... this is interesting!!

-smelly_man!

Re: Padded Cell (User Rating: 1 )
by izzy on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:32:30 PM AEST
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This such a hoot. My goodness dear what an imaginenation you have.
Izzy

Re: Padded Cell (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:37:52 PM AEST
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powerful write, this is reality for some people, sometimes I thought thats where I was heading into a padded cell, a great write,

pixie xx

Re: Padded Cell (User Rating: 1 )
by philophine on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:39:26 PM AEST
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This one just screams for a response. Funny =)
NP

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