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So Many Tears
Contributed by
Cynthia
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:27:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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*~~~*
So many tears
fall to this day,
three long years
people still in disarray.
*~~~*
So many lives lost
in this tragedy,
it was a deadly cost
tears still lick my cheeks.
*~~~*
Hearts are still sad
souls still cry,
evil-doers still bad
the tears can't be dried.
*~~~*
Loved ones being missed
after three long years,
lips never to be kissed
no whispers in ears.
*~~~*
We will remember them
all day and night,
their hearts were gems
never had a need to fight.
*~~~*
Three lonely years
since they've left this harsh place,
so many tears
fall down God's loving face.
*~~~*
In our hearts they
will be kept,
nobody will forget the day
the Heavenly Angels wept.
*~~~*
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Sept.11/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-10-12 21:27:08]
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Re: So Many Tears
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:33:26 PM AEST
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Sad but a fine tribute to those that lost their lives and for the ones left behind.
luv, huggs,
emy
A fine tribute, indeed. |
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Re: So Many Tears
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:55:23 PM AEST
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| very nice. its surprising though that it takes a massacre for people to care about the evil in todays world though. |
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Re: So Many Tears
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by Dorian on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:24:45 PM AEST
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beautifully stated, a true epitab of courage and
exquisit peice of rememberance, bravo 4u
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Dorian : ) |
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Re: So Many Tears
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:32:38 AM AEST
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O Cynthia,
This was truly magnificent and it gave me a lump in my throat! It's really good to see a totally different kind of poem from you than what I'm used to! Keep writing!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: So Many Tears
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:30:11 AM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL,JUST LIKE THAT OF YOUR HEART! THAT HAS A MEANING ALL ITS OWN,WHICH MEANS EVEN THOUGH THEIR GONE,MEMORIES WILL NEVER LEAVE THEM ALL ALONE! VERY NICE & WHAT A DEDICATION!! IT SHALL INSPIRE MANY MORE!!!
Lots Of Love~DAN!!!!
P.S. THANKS FOR WRITING IT FOR THEM,I'M SURE THEY'RE JUST AS TOUCHED!!!!! |
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Re: So Many Tears
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by tormentedpixie on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:15:25 PM AEST
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| Great write. So emotional. You expressed the emotion so well. Loved it. It was such a heartfelt tibrute to those lost and those left behind. Great work. ^_^ |
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