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Array ( [sid] => 67171 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain inside [time] => 2004-10-12 20:30:33 [hometext] => im not to sure about this poem. it talks about how bad loving someone can hurt. [bodytext] => I can't stop the pain thats inside.
Its eating me alive.
I call you up to talk about it.
But you dont answer.
I leave a message on your cell.
But you dont call back.
Do you hate me now?
Now that i need someone so bad.
I can't go through life like this anymore.
Yesterday i tried to kill myself.
All i could think about was how it would make you feel.
I want to die so bad.
Will i ever feel real?
When will this ***** end?
Cause its tearing me apart.
I can't help it anymore.
I'm already dead.
I just havn't pulled the trigger. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => pyro_88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Pain inside

Contributed by pyro_88 on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 08:30:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I can't stop the pain thats inside.
Its eating me alive.
I call you up to talk about it.
But you dont answer.
I leave a message on your cell.
But you dont call back.
Do you hate me now?
Now that i need someone so bad.
I can't go through life like this anymore.
Yesterday i tried to kill myself.
All i could think about was how it would make you feel.
I want to die so bad.
Will i ever feel real?
When will this ***** end?
Cause its tearing me apart.
I can't help it anymore.
I'm already dead.
I just havn't pulled the trigger.

Copyright Â© pyro_88 ... [ 2004-10-12 20:30:33]
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Re: Pain inside (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:07:02 PM AEST
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I could feel your pain in this write. So very sad but written well great job take care and please don't pull the trigger ok? We all would miss you on here not speaking of how your family would miss you even more.

Brandy

Re: Pain inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:55:36 PM AEST
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I feel your pain, but nobody is worth taking your life over,

Re: Pain inside (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:58:12 PM AEST
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i know this pain all too well....i know how badly it sux...great write tho

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Pain inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:12:31 PM AEST
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amazing write. powerful and heart wrenching. you showed your talent very well.

Re: Pain inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:05:09 PM AEST
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wow...very good! i liked it much!

I'm already dead.
I just havn't pulled the trigger.

i just loved that lil piece! awesome work!
nicely written!

¤~::.. a n d e ..::~¤

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