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Array ( [sid] => 67086 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Another Day [time] => 2004-10-12 07:10:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => with nothing left to say
I slit my wrist
and start another day
seeing the sun again
letting the blade sink in
walk off to school
my blood
collecting in a little pool
no body knows
this pain this hurt
locked away in my head
all the time I wish I'm dead
Linkin Park blaring through my cd player
hate seeping through all the clothes I layer
black upon black
with cutting as a fact
do you drown in all your alcohol
and enjoy watching me fall
don't you just love the way the blood flows
through the air, watching the as the wind blows
so cloudy outside
so many places to hide
why am I worthless to you
why do I believe its true
in the shadows I fall asleep
wrists to chest
blood all over the sheets
it turns the color of brown
as in my head I drown
why do I hear
your voice in my head
telling me I should be dead
what is left of me
of this sad family
if thats what you would call it
I don't know anymore
this hurt burns me to my core
eyes poring so many tears
which is just a build up of all the years [comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 36 [informant] => screwup [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Just Another Day

Contributed by screwup on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:10:59 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



with nothing left to say
I slit my wrist
and start another day
seeing the sun again
letting the blade sink in
walk off to school
my blood
collecting in a little pool
no body knows
this pain this hurt
locked away in my head
all the time I wish I'm dead
Linkin Park blaring through my cd player
hate seeping through all the clothes I layer
black upon black
with cutting as a fact
do you drown in all your alcohol
and enjoy watching me fall
don't you just love the way the blood flows
through the air, watching the as the wind blows
so cloudy outside
so many places to hide
why am I worthless to you
why do I believe its true
in the shadows I fall asleep
wrists to chest
blood all over the sheets
it turns the color of brown
as in my head I drown
why do I hear
your voice in my head
telling me I should be dead
what is left of me
of this sad family
if thats what you would call it
I don't know anymore
this hurt burns me to my core
eyes poring so many tears
which is just a build up of all the years




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Re: Just Another Day (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:33:42 AM AEST
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Deep and emotional.......Not just another day tho........We all are a person, and all deserve to be heard and seen. Don't let them take you down.......


Re: Just Another Day (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:08:42 PM AEST
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WOW very emotional i love it! it a very great poem ...the structure the way it flows everything its perfect! ur very talented keep writting


Re: Just Another Day (User Rating: 1 )
by metro on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:51:08 PM AEST
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extremely real... great write...




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