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Array ( [sid] => 67066 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost without hope [time] => 2004-10-12 00:39:17 [hometext] => This is an old peom. Pleaase comment. It's aboout not feeling love. [bodytext] => A life alone,
Is like music with no tone.
Where is my special one hiding?
With myself I'm constantly fighting.

Searching the earth inside and out,
My mind now fills with doubt.
I keep on looking but I'm so far away,
The person of my dreams is in my mind everyday.

Could it be that I'm doomed to never love,
But still I look behind each person's hug.
As I listen to the world I can't help but feel as if they're here,
But as I listen I do not use my human ears.

The pressure's building and I start to choke,
What is it that chokes: my dreams and hope.
Everything is fading to black,
How I wish I could turn time back.

But as I sit here and search,
My pumkin turns to a hurse.
False non heart ach; I'm tired of fakin,
Times up... the posion has taken.

It's the end of the line,
If only I had more time. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 32 [informant] => loulou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Lost without hope

Contributed by loulou on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:39:17 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

A life alone,
Is like music with no tone.
Where is my special one hiding?
With myself I'm constantly fighting.

Searching the earth inside and out,
My mind now fills with doubt.
I keep on looking but I'm so far away,
The person of my dreams is in my mind everyday.

Could it be that I'm doomed to never love,
But still I look behind each person's hug.
As I listen to the world I can't help but feel as if they're here,
But as I listen I do not use my human ears.

The pressure's building and I start to choke,
What is it that chokes: my dreams and hope.
Everything is fading to black,
How I wish I could turn time back.

But as I sit here and search,
My pumkin turns to a hurse.
False non heart ach; I'm tired of fakin,
Times up... the posion has taken.

It's the end of the line,
If only I had more time.

Copyright © loulou ... [ 2004-10-12 00:39:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost without hope (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:01:57 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem alot, its bueatifully written.

Jane x

Re: Lost without hope (User Rating: 1 )
by m3 on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:58:23 AM AEST
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Is so true in so many people I know. Poetry like this makes me stop and think about the time I've wasted, and makes me think harder about wasting more time... Very good poem!!!

Re: Lost without hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 02:14:55 AM AEST
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It was a great poem, but i dont believe that there is even love out there.

Re: Lost without hope (User Rating: 1 )
by blueeyedevil13 on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:07:44 AM AEST
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i can relate. its a really excellent poem. keep writing.
av

Re: Lost without hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Without_Hope on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 11:08:15 PM AEST
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I realy like this. Its realy sad. I think most people can relate to that poem. . . I certainly can. Keep up the good work.

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