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Dark Heart
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:04:55 PM in AEST
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Deep inside Anger flooding my heart No longer can I see My souls torn apart
All along the Jagged edge My heart it bleeds So close to dead
The dripping blood Slowly feeds On every living Memories
Torn apart Ripped in to Theres only so much Some one can do
Please dont ask Or try to see The pain that comes From with in me
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tractorbabe
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2004-10-11 21:04:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dark Heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:13:30 PM AEST (User
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| very good write, but check your grammar. |
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Re: Dark Heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by mylastwords on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:20:42 PM AEST (User
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great write once again...i love your work...i feel it...keep it up...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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