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Array ( [sid] => 66776 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Prisoner in Shackles [time] => 2004-10-09 22:14:35 [hometext] => I wrote this as a song, and to stay true to the original intent decided not to alter the format but instead to leave the / marks in. Thanks for reading this since I just lost my 3 yr relationship to a phone call from across the sea. Comments? [bodytext] => I’m a prisoner in shackles taken to the chamber/ No one guessed but I could have named her/ as an accomplice to arrest her body/ then throw in my cell to lay with me till death.

But still the sins I’ve understood/ are too late to do me any good/ I’d repent now but I’m wishing for the end/ to come like a ship and sail me away from these lonesome harbors.

So strap me in and lean me back/ and inject my veins with poison/ that hurts less than a kiss from lips of lies/ or our last exchange that ended in tears.

My broken heart has softened now/ as I escape into the darkness higher than ever/ you could save me but you choose to hide/ behind a translucent screen to watch my light dim.

And with the last glimpse of shutting eyes/ I turn to see your silhouette/ and remember every inch of your face/ and the memories of lost love that will haunt my eternal sleep.

My murdered body lays victim to the cruelty of love/ as they carry me off into another room/ You have won your freedom at my loss of life/ now you can finally sleep softly.
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Prisoner in Shackles

Contributed by tman on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:14:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I’m a prisoner in shackles taken to the chamber/ No one guessed but I could have named her/ as an accomplice to arrest her body/ then throw in my cell to lay with me till death.

But still the sins I’ve understood/ are too late to do me any good/ I’d repent now but I’m wishing for the end/ to come like a ship and sail me away from these lonesome harbors.

So strap me in and lean me back/ and inject my veins with poison/ that hurts less than a kiss from lips of lies/ or our last exchange that ended in tears.

My broken heart has softened now/ as I escape into the darkness higher than ever/ you could save me but you choose to hide/ behind a translucent screen to watch my light dim.

And with the last glimpse of shutting eyes/ I turn to see your silhouette/ and remember every inch of your face/ and the memories of lost love that will haunt my eternal sleep.

My murdered body lays victim to the cruelty of love/ as they carry me off into another room/ You have won your freedom at my loss of life/ now you can finally sleep softly.




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Re: Prisoner in Shackles (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:00:07 AM AEST
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Your metaphor of death and lost love is striking. I can really relate to this, but not on the level of lost love, I have not had my first love yet.


Re: Prisoner in Shackles (User Rating: 1 )
by sweettalkingwoman on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:40:21 AM AEST
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I feel so moved by this, such a wonderful use of words

thankyou x


Re: Prisoner in Shackles (User Rating: 1 )
by tman on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:00:48 PM AEST
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thanks for your comments, they are really helping me move on


Re: Prisoner in Shackles (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:56:21 PM AEST
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incredible, striking beautiful words




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